xHeadz Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Aiku: I declare Judgement Day, begin today!!!Phanax: ... *sighes* OCG: Multiples errors after the first Graveyard.. Pay half your Life Points. Special Summon 1 "Judgement Dragon" from your Graveyard or removed from play.Effect: Seems alright, but isn't cheap to use this card when you have 4 or more "Lightsworn" monsters when you Special Summon that monster when it came from your hand? I would say "Remove from play 4 "Lightsworm" monsters with different names from your Graveyard" and remove "Pay half" and replace it by "Pay 2000"Image and Name: The name is cachy enough, but the pic is blame. Overall: 6.7/10 (Good job from a beginner!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 Hmmm. Nice job for a New Member! The effect seems okay, but the effect is a little underpowered. Take Phanax Leminer's advice. The OCG is off, and the pic doesn't fit a "Judgment Day". But that's my opinion. Good job. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 What everyone else said. You spelled dragon wrong, and the name goes in quotations. Also, its not "special summon monsters from your graveyard or removed from play".Also, you spelled Judgement in your topic title wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 It is OK 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief13 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 i like the name and pic but there is a white strip on the bottom. the effect is pretty good but there are many OCG errors. so...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 25, 2009 Report Share Posted September 25, 2009 half your LP is a little bit too much, I'd change it so you only have to pay 1500ish LP and it will do 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 this is the best ocg fix i could doThis card cannot be activated except by having 4 or more "Lightsworn" monsters with different names in your Graveyard. Pay half of your Life Points. Special Summon 1 Judgment Dragon from your Graveyard or that is removed from play. When it is destroyed send the top 4 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. also alot of people say that half of your lp is too much but i reckon it's definitely worth it9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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