Chicada Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Hope you like em!!!!!!!! i will put more later. Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card card can only be summoned by removing from play 2 Aqua-Type monsters. This card is also treated as a Beast-Type monster. This card cannot attack on the turn it is summoned. At the end of each of your turns, pay 300 Life Points or destroy this card and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can pay 200 life points to to special summon a fish token(LV2/ Water-Type/500 ATK/500 DEF)to the field. When this card is destroyed, you can send all the fish tokens to the graveyard to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. Credit goes to a lot of people from deviantart for the pics.Some more for ya:even more for ya: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 change aqua-type to Aqua-type normal summoned to Normal Summoned, etc the token you need to state the stats, type, and attribute 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMZ Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Fix the grammar and then my mark will be 9/10.(this card cannot attack in the same turn it is Summoned.) for example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 k. will doallrighty. fixed :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Ocg corrections and overused pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakiru Takagi Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 Pros: Cool pic, balancedCons: Bad OCG, Bottom Right needs to say *1996 kazuki takahashi*, save the card to a set eg. Legend of Blue eyes White Dragon pack : exodia the forbiden one = LOB-EN124 other than that... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 i pointed out some a lot of OCG errorsThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 2 Aqua-Type monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it was Summoned. At the End Phase of your turn, pay 300 Life Points or destroy this card and remove it from play. Once per turn, you can pay 200 life points to Special Summon a [Token Name?]token([which Type?]/LV2/[which attribute?]/500 ATK/500 DEF)to the field. When this card is destroyed, you can send all the [Token Name] to the graveyard to inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent.there are more but i can't point out all your OCG errors7/10improve your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted September 26, 2009 Report Share Posted September 26, 2009 OCG needs work. Overused pic. Try not to make duel types. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Why does it have to say Kazuki Takahashi? What's the matter with dual types? I fixed OCG check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Duel types. Noob alert.Don't do duel types. It sends up noob alerts.As for the ocg, there are quite a few errors. The pic is heavily overused. The effect could use some adjustment (For starters, FINISH describing the tokens. For one, you didn't even name them, you just said "token". For another, you didn't name a type or attribute), maybe editing it to be 400 life points PER token, instead of it being the collabotation of all the tokens. That way, having 1 token and having 4 actually makes some difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Why no dual types? I named the tokens and have already fixed that!!! Look with your eyes,bro.Why Cant I? Any way use your eyes therye already fixed and read it properly [two star noob...]Why Cant I? Any way use your eyes therye already fixed and read it properly [two star noob...]srry fur triple post...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 because thre isn't any card with two typesbut if you clear the Beast-Type and you put This card is also treated as a Beast-Type Monster. as the first effect then it will be o.k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 o.........k................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Why no dual types? I named the tokens and have already fixed that!!! Look with your eyes' date='bro.[hr']Why Cant I? Any way use your eyes therye already fixed and read it properly [two star noob...]Why Cant I? Any way use your eyes therye already fixed and read it properly [two star noob...]srry fur triple post...... Sorry Mr. Douchebag, you edited it while I was posting.You STILL didn't add the type of the tokens, and its WATER (as in attribute, and goes BEFORE the level, which is spelled level, not LV), not water-type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Pros: Cool pic' date=' balancedCons: Bad OCG, Bottom Right needs to say *1996 kazuki takahashi*, save the card to a set eg. Legend of Blue eyes White Dragon pack : exodia the forbiden one = LOB-EN124 other than that... 7.5/10[/quote'] It doesn't need to say 1996 Kazuki Takahashi it's not his card that he actually created its created by a different person not the artist/creator of the Yu-Gi-Oh cards and also you don't need to listen what that guy put about putting it to a set that's just optional but overall the card is pretty balanced I just see alot of OCG errors. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Sorry Mr. Douchebag, i was already doing it when you were typing your rude replyNew cards added!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diaboli Mors Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 ...you are calling HIM rude? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 just copying him,can't help it. Anyway, if you're not gonna rate my threads, please dont post on my thread (no offense meant to given). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otto194 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 well i dont care what they say i love the cards but the ocg could use a little work other than that.............9.5/10 great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 thanks for the rating!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 New cards added!!!!!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto99and3/4 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 WHERE DO U GET THE PICTURES?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 NEVER tellin!!! >:D har har har.. P.S. check http://www.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiWolfe Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 You know there is a Dragon-Type right? instead of making all your dragons a beast type which makes no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Kaza Doragon's effect is a bit too bland, can you give it another one? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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