Mysterious Stranger Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 my first card, plz rate and comment:Effect:IF YOU CONTROL THIS FACEUP MONSTER DURING YOUR STANDBY PHASE, YOU MAY SUMMON ONE 'MONTAGE DRAGON' FROM YOUR HAND, DECK OR GRAVEYARD. IF YOU SUMMON MONTAGE DRAGON IN THIS WAY, IT HAS 3000 ATTACK POINTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Don't cap every letter, no one likes that. Also, It's not too original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 2000 def is too much for lv3, and don't use caps for everything on the text 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 I don't think 2000 DEF is too much for a lvl 3. Charcoal Impachi has 2100 DEF and it's lvl 1. ANYway, fix capitals, effect is somewhat overdone (even though most effects are), and pic needs background. Since you're new, 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 I think its OP, overall so i would work on that. The fact that you capitilised most words gives it horrible OCG. The pic is a bit bland but not as needed i guess, 6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Since your new: 5/10Otherwise: 3-4/10 (Somewhere in that area) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 Hm... It's a good start. But you should have a lower defense as a drawback since it could Special Summon a super powerful monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolz Dialgaz Posted September 28, 2009 Report Share Posted September 28, 2009 good for your first try 7/10 could be lv 4 due to def points though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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