26walls Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Use a capital in the nameImage is good, but could be slightly betterDo not add a description in the effect. Here's a fixed version:"Activate this card when 1 "Akatsuski" monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle. Inflict 800 damage to your opponent." 4.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterMindWorldConqeror Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 All is okay but the descripe is makeing me confuse ( and wrong spelling) 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 post the card not a link next time , need better gramer and use capitals 2/10 :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxas94 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Dude it's good and try to do better in the future. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 fix OCG and grammar and its "Akatsuki" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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