Lighting102 Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Here goes the first card I've made and posted. It's a Zatch Bell card and I plan on doing a set. It's my first card so...any suggestions are highly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Actually pretty good. Pic needs background, though. OCG looks fine, but it borders on the mistake line. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lighting102 Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Picture updated and thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubblin Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 pic is not goodOCG isnt too greatmehishnot bad for a first card though 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 This is good for a first card. OCG needs work. Try this:When this card destroys a monster with "Mamodo" in its name as a result of battle, increase this cards' ATK points by 100. Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 The pic is better than before, but the best pics have no borders, cool background (which this 1 has) and show at least half the monster's body. 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 eh sokay, not great, not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Not bad for a first card but the pic shouldn't have a border. OCG is ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lighting102 Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I've got a new picture...it might not be the best at the moment but it fits the bill as far as showing half the monsters body. I am still on the hunt for a better one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I liked the old pic better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Picture needs to be changed, OCG fix thanks to blade- When this card destroys a monster with "Mamodo" in its name as a result of battle, increase this card's ATK points by 100. Not bad, once changed even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightbringer37 Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Quite a good card, better than my first!My only critisism is to find better quality pictures.7/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForetoldWarrior Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 meh it's ok need better pics so 8/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simpsonsrule Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Nice job for your first card, it's pretty cool. :) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Not bad, but it could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lighting102 Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Thanks for the comments and the OOC notice, updating immediately. EDIT: UPDATED AGAIN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 It's all fixed up and a much better pic to boot! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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