HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Depressing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I sooo wanna kill myself now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 This is supposed to be a happy story :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I fail to see or sense happiness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I fail to see or sense happiness. The main character is happy at the end. Duh. I dunno...my girlfriend and sister both found it to be happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 YAY HE DIED INTO THE STARS! = super happy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 I like the irony. The contrast between the idea that death is something bad, and that someone is happier dead is amazing. [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Well if you want to look at it in the obvious aspect =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Get a better scanner. The constant change in lighting is pissing me off. Also, Lion King kicks this story's ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 It feels okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Well, he's okay. :/ Would do much better as text-only, IMHO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Get a better scanner. The constant change in lighting is pissing me off. Also' date=' Lion King kicks this story's ass.[/quote'] I used a camera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Get a better scanner. The constant change in lighting is pissing me off. Also' date=' Lion King kicks this story's ass.[/quote'] I used a camera. That would explain it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Deep. HORUS. Real deep. It's good. Except for the drawing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Contained an introduction, rising action, a climax, falling action, and a conclusion! dude i hate english class Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Contained an introduction' date=' rising action, a climax, falling action, and a conclusion! dude i hate english class[/quote'] It gets worse. Then they have you analyze everything, and put meaning to it, even if clearly the author didn't have any purpose behind that part except that he felt like funking putting it there.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Deep. HORUS. Real deep. It's good. Except for the drawing... The drawings are my favourite part... Actually, the drawing for the part when he realizes he's underground is very poor. I mean to redo that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 29, 2009 Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Contained an introduction' date=' rising action, a climax, falling action, and a conclusion! dude i hate english class[/quote'] It gets worse. Then they have you analyze everything, and put meaning to it, even if clearly the author didn't have any purpose behind that part except that he felt like f***ing putting it there.... Everyone is Jesus in Purgatory. [/flame-fanning] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted September 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2009 Contained an introduction' date=' rising action, a climax, falling action, and a conclusion! dude i hate english class[/quote'] It gets worse. Then they have you analyze everything, and put meaning to it, even if clearly the author didn't have any purpose behind that part except that he felt like f***ing putting it there.... Everyone is Jesus in Purgatory. [/flame-fanning] Can we keep it on topic please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I don't get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Contained an introduction' date=' rising action, a climax, falling action, and a conclusion! dude i hate english class[/quote'] It gets worse. Then they have you analyze everything, and put meaning to it, even if clearly the author didn't have any purpose behind that part except that he felt like f***ing putting it there.... Everyone is Jesus in Purgatory. [/flame-fanning] Can we keep it on topic please? It is on topic, but I guess I didn't really draw it out well. The link was basically a TvTropes article summarizing the entire pyramid-ed discussion. My bad. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I don't know about other people, but I liked it. :/ I felt that the meaning was you started being happy (seeing stars), you became unhappy (underground), and you became happy again through a seemingly unhappy event (death w/ stars). If you posted this for the lulz (unlikely), disregard this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I don't know about other people' date=' but I liked it. :/ [b']I felt that the meaning was you started being happy (seeing stars), you became unhappy (underground), and you became happy again through a seemingly unhappy event (death w/ stars).[/b] If you posted this for the lulz (unlikely), disregard this post. Thanx captain obvious? I felt that the lack of arms on the figure represented the inability to fight the inevitable (death), and yet, the figure was still happy in life, despite this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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