~Reborn~ Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 hi guys this is my first card made using the card maker... tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 A little OP.But not bad for your first card. 8/10 (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treegrover Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 nice card considering the spellingmake sure to check your spelling before you finish a cardkeep doing what your doing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 It's good, for a first card.A bit to Op.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Very good for a first card but slightly OP'ed. Also the OCG could really use some improvement.Try this, "If this card attacks the opponent directly, double any battle damage your opponent receives. You can remove 20 cards in your deck from play to destroy all cards on the field except this card. All cards destroyed by this card's effect have their effects negated."You may think that half of your deck being removed from play is a bad thing, but when combo'ed with, lets say: the Helios set, Gold homunculus, gren maju da eiza, chaos greed, ect.: then you can basically win. If you don't know what some of these cards do, check yugioh.wikia.com. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted September 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 thanx for you suggestions!Here's my new one... I still need to fix the pic quality... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 good pic and effect I like this card.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Artist(s) cred. needed. Effect is overpowered as funk./10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 it's ok.... Remove 20 cards?!!!!! thats a bit crazy 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Something looks familiar here... Try using images that are not from real cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 Cmon now, almost no one knows that card (from duel terminal)! Anyway I will give you a 8/10 for encouragement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 30, 2009 Report Share Posted September 30, 2009 I'd remove the doubling damage effect or at least tune it down, 5000 damage would be too much 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 k guys... I'm still working...but i still can't fix the blur... If you really can't see the effect (I can't) here it is...__________________________________________________________________________This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Raging Flare Destruction". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. If this card attacks the opponent directly, double any battle damage your opponent receives. You can remove 10 cards in your deck or graveyard from play to destroy all cards on the field except this card. All cards destroyed by this card's effect have their effects negated.Raging Flare Destruction will be my 2nd card!did some more....................Same effectWHICH ONE DO U LIKE BETTER?????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 the 2nd one obviously looks better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Is everything alright now??? If not someone say so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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