i want everybody to tell me what i can do to fix up my cards.

[26walls]

[Guest Neo Fusion]

here's an idea for you: go and get all ur yugioh cards and just read thru em a lot until u get an understanding of OCG (official card grammar) and then post effects only under effect monsters and use grammar properly in ur normal monsters. thats how u can fix ur cards

[HitoKage]

Try to find better pictures as well.

[destron]

killer weapon's effect . . . really. no offense but these r extremely bad. srry if i sound harsh, but these need lots of work. pics, ocg, creativity even. just look before u leap. find some cards that people give 7/10 or higher and see if u can pick some things up, and don't try again until u have got wat u think can match up to those kinda cards.

[El Make]

Chicago= Shukaku (unless you wanted it that way...)

OCG= Official card grammar which you desperatley need to learn.

Ballance= level and ATK and DEF are on the same scale (ex. lvl 8 w/ 2500 ATK or lvl 3 w/ 700 ATK)

Good pics= Self explanatory.

 

To learn OCG go around topics and if people aren't complaining about OCG errors check out the cards.

[Kato_Zenamara]

I didn't even read through these. I never read through card sets that are spammed with cards that have absolutely no relation to each other, and most people don't either.

Do NOT make up types. You just don't.

When you make vanillas (tan, non-effect cards) you don't put an effect on them, and you try your best to make the decriptions sound cool and collected.

Effect cards (orange) MUST have an effect. They are not used as weird colored vanillas.

Don't double post cards, especially right next to each other.

When you dabble with different type of cards (Synchro, Ritual, Effect, Spirit, etc.) make sure you know how to OCG them. For example, your Kyuubi is NOT a ritual monster. Tributing doesn't make it a ritual monster, having a ritual magic card does.

Find good pictures, not the crap half your cards are made of.

To tell the truth, it looks like some three year olds typed these cards up. At least then their descriptions would have imagination to it (not "Its a big ape" (actually, thats BETTER than what your card said "very strong ape")).

I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, but thats how people rate things here. If your cards suck, they will tell you. If you screw up and cry about it, you'll get complained at even more. All in all, you suck or you don't. So try not to suck.