MY DRAGON DECK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 6/???

[taekaba123]

 

 

Credit Of The Pictures Goes To Deviantart.

[ForetoldWarrior]

Interesting set. The last card is a little oped. Try this: When this card is Special Summoned, it can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. 8.5/10

[taekaba123]

Ok :D

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[cmc1234]

this is verey overused idea so verey unoriginal

dragons are so overused as well

though i dont mind them

there is some ocg, stands for offical card grammer, so maybe check out the ocg thread to help you, or pm me about it

when you want to say a number like "one" you dont spell it you just say "1". I have noticed that in your card effects.

also some effects are to simple and need something more. And a drawback of some sort.

so some of the cards are op'd but only for this reason.

also there is some spelling errors like when you say "remain on the field" it should be "Remains on the field".

 

overall the card are ok and not bad for your first few.

 

6/10

[13rats]

Don't capitalize every word in the effects as if they were titles. There are some OCG errors, and the effects overall aren't the most interesting. A couple of the cards are a bit OP for their levels, as well (for instance, Fire Dragon and Water Dragon have 2000 ATK and 1800 or 1900 DEF, plus a helpful effect, and they're only lv. 4).

 

Clarify as to how you summon Earth Dragon (can you Special Summon him by tributing 2 cards and Normal Summon him by tributing 1 monster?), and provide drawbacks to the effects so they aren't just powerful monsters with powerful effects. Retribution of the Dragon Lord is very OP, considering that one fusion has 3100 ATK and 3000 DEF, and the other has 3000 ATK and 2900 DEF, and there are very many Dragon fusions out there that would be worth well over 500 life points. Dragon's Wrath also needs a drawback, since it useful effects.

 

The pics are very nice. Overall, I'd say 6/10, 8.5-9/10 if you fix the effects up to be less OP and more interesting, as well as the OCG.

 

Edit: Also, please don't put 52 exclamation marks in the thread title. 1 will suffice.

[taekaba123]

sorry about the title :]

[ragnarok1945]

half the card effects are too simple, you should add another to them, then a drawback to balance it out

 

6.5/10

[taekaba123]

ok ill edit it later or tomorrow..

[AeonZghost]

i like em alot actually too bad its nothing against my Rainbow Dragon ;(

[Jamop CardMaker]

Images are totally overused. You capitalized every word and OCG is off. And also, what is with the spaces?

 

 

 

Hmm... 2/10.

[YU-GI-OH 3600]

yo, wheres the dark dragon.

besides that it is very good, 9/10

[taekaba123]

I updated my cards I cant post it because im using a psp.....

[luke15buckley]

Cool.

I like this card set.

Hey if you need ritual dragon type's just tell me then i'll make them for you OK.

[Chaos Flame]

I really don't have much too say. Its good for a noob,but you really need to work on OCG. For wording, just readthe text on a lot of cards until you get used to it. For capitalization, remember that terms that mean different things in the game than in real life like Monster, Spell Trap, and other game specific terms. Also give the numeral for a number, not the word.

[luke15buckley]

Hey im new to this site so I have much to learn.

[taekaba123]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-158717.html