Hoopla Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Only my second finished card. Version 1 Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon type monsters with different names from your Graveyard. When this card is successfully summoned on to the field, all monsters on the field are destroyed except this card. You cannot enter your battle phase the turn this effect was activated. Version 2: Corrected OCG Thanks to Tomtekorv Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard. When this card is successfully summoned, destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated. Version 3: Re-Corrected OCG Thanks to ♥Łövëły Łäđy♥ Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard from play. When this card is successfully Summoned, destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated. So whatcha think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Pretty good for first card, pic is good, name as well, effect is good to, a bit hard ro summon, but has massive ATK so its almost perfectly balanced outFixed OCG:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard. When this card is successfully summoned, destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated.Overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Very nice ;) OCG correction has been given already. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Pretty good for first card' date=' pic is good, name as well, effect is good to, a bit hard ro summon, but has massive ATK so its almost perfectly balanced outFixed OCG:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard. When this card is successfully summoned, destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated.Overall 8/10[/quote'] Thanks, I will update the card with the fixed OCG. :) Very nice ;) OCG correction has been given already. 8/10 Thank you. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard from play. When this card is successfully sSummoned, destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated." Slash : Move it or lose it Bold : Correct Its picture isnt bad but it could be loads better and its overused but your new so you wouldnt quite know that. The Second versions ocg has been fixed. It had minor OCG errors. Its effect is balanced enough. Its attack Im a little iffy about but its fine. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters with different names in your Graveyard from play. When this card is successfully sSummoned' date=' destroy all monsters on the field (exept this). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect was activated." Slash : Move it or lose it Bold : Correct Its picture isnt bad but it could be loads better and its overused but your new so you wouldnt quite know that. The Second versions ocg has been fixed. It had minor OCG errors. Its effect is balanced enough. Its attack Im a little iffy about but its fine. 7/10[/quote'] Thanks for re-fixing the OCG. I will make note of these changes for the next time I make a card, and I will update the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 "Remove from play" is correct, "from play" almost always proceeds "remove", as in it is not at the end of the sentence. Anyway, not bad, I've seen the image before but it is alright. I'm not a big fan of these types of effects, and this kind of card, but this card seems relatively balanced. However in a dragon deck it could be overpowered, as having 5 dragons in your Graveyard would not be so rare. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonwendy Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Nice pic. Great OCG. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 with the OCG corrections it looks pretty balanced out, although 5 dragons in your graveyard isn't exactly that hard to do 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Thanks everyone. :) Do you guys suggest I up it to 7 dragons? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 "Remove from play" is correct' date=' "from play" almost always proceeds "remove", as in it is not at the end of the sentence. 7/10[/quote'] There are cards with remove from play effect where it phrases it as "Remove~~~~~~~in your~~~~from play" for example: Dark Mirror Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 That card itself says "remove from play", even though the type next to it says otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Oh >> Well then I'm mistaken. ^^' Although I must admit it sounds better the way I had it. It sounds more structually correct to me atleast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Very nice, 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aa'une Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Cool. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Very nice' date=' 9.7/10[/quote'] Cool. 9.5/10 Thanks guys. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Bump. I want to see what more people think of this card. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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