Trinitial Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 OP. Up the Level, give it a drawback, and at least make it end during the end phase. Also its totally dull. Add more effects to make it funner :3 also it completely unoriginal. Its just spirit ryu for spirit monsters. OCG Fix:"Oce per turn, you can discard 1 Spirit monster from your hand to have this card gain 1000 ATK." :[ not your best card. Work on it more and I'm sure it'll get better Honest rate 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 ok, I edited it a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 That made it more OP. "In battle" should be "by battle" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 There's no pleasing you :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 Lol sorry if Im discouraging! I can help you out if you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 1, 2009 Report Share Posted October 1, 2009 ok kinda OPed. what LL said was right. i can also help ~3.9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Unclean One: VK Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 4/10. Pic good. Effect needs work, also you need a drawback.... this is how I would do it. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. ( Damage calculations apply normaly.) Once, during your stand by phase, you can discard 1 Spirit type monster from your hand. When you activate this effect, this card gains 1000 attack points until the end of your turn. During your end phase, pay 500 life points, or destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 It is OK the OCG needs work I luv the pic thoughh 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 4/10. Pic good. Effect needs work' date=' also you need a drawback.... this is how I would do it. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. ( Damage calculations apply normaly.) Once, during your stand by phase, you can discard 1 Spirit type monster from your hand. When you activate this effect, this card gains 1000 attack points until the end of your turn. During your end phase, pay 500 life points, or destroy this card.[/quote']Its the exact same effect except you just changed it to make it sound longer. It changes nothing and the life point payment is unnecessary. You shouldnt have to pay to keep it on the field. Its like Spirit Ryu. He just needs to add in another effect. Let him get his own idea. Don't pressure him to use your idea. If he asks for help then ask him... Ew I sound like a mother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I'll give this a little more thought and I'll edit it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 You really should increase the lvl.Pic is somewhat squished.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 not sure why you made it zombie type, but effect relies on spirit types 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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