~Reborn~ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 [align=center]Hi guys! This is my third card yet and first time to attempt holo[/align] My OCG sucks like mad so would anyone help me??? :shock:My OCG sucks like mad so would anyone help me??? :shock: ---------------------------------------------------------------------GorittGorittEffect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters and discarding your Hand. You can halve the ATK and DEF of all monsters in your Graveyard to gain that ATK and DEF. This cards effect can be only used once in a Duel. ---------------------------------------------------------------------ArcumisArcumisEffect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Spell Card, 1 Trap Card and 1 Monster. You can toss a coin, if●Heads: Destroy all Monsters on the Field except "Goritt, the Annihilator" and this card. ●Tails: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the Field. This cards effect can only be used once in a Duel (MY DOTS AREN'T ON MY CARD. WHY???)--------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 The Holo effect is covering the image. I would use the Holo effect sparingly and it should be in the background not in the foreground. The effect isn't really fair can easily set up a OTK. The ATK/DEF is where it should be for 3 tributes, but then you have to discard, so I guess it deserves more ATK/DEF to it. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 okthanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Capitalization Capitalization Capitalization i.e. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krondalix Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Two things to say: 1- The image would be better without the holo effetc (secret rare i think).2- In your effect you don't mean the half ATK and DEF substracted is added to your monster. Correct this and your card will be better ^^; 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 thanx for your comments! another one coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom3210 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 absaloutely awsome i like your monster cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Some ocg errors but good cards 7/10 til you fixed ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Goritt's effect is WAY too powerful of an effect for atk boosting, it can easily gain well over 4000 atk this way, and since it has 3300 base atk already........... can you write out Arcumis's lore? I can't read it 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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