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Unfinished Set!! 17/????


taekaba123

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I do see a whole bunch of CaPiTaLiZaTiOn errors though...

Also, you should use at least some commas.

Also, "while remains" not "when".

Also, "Summon to the field" is a meaningless phrase - where ELSE could you Summon? And also needs a specification - Summon from where: hand/Deck/Graveyard???

Also, a funny phrase: "destroy one card on your opponent's hand". Makes me think of: "-Doctor, we're losing him! -Don't worry, just discard the patient! {Alternative version: -Don't worry, just put the patient into your Graveyard! -Oh, thank you, Doctor!!!}" :lol:

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