Hoopla Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 So here is another try at making a card. It was quite difficult for me to think of an effect for this card. Tell me what you think. [spoiler=[b]Koraz the Immortal (Fixed OCG Thanks to C-2)[/b]] Effect:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Normal Summon any monsters. [spoiler=[b]Koraz the Immortal: Version 2 (Replaced "Normal Summon" with "Summon")[/b]] Effect:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Summon any monsters. [spoiler=[b]Koraz the Immortal: Version 3 (Added Something to the Effect)[/b]] Effect:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster until the End Phase. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Normal Summon any monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 It may be to Op, becouse if you have some kind of Special Summoner already on the field, this card would be a pain.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Bad ocg This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Normal Summon any monsters. Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 It may be to Op' date=' becouse if you have some kind of Special Summoner already on the field, this card would be a pain.A 8/10[/quote'] Really? I tried to balance it out, well I think I did. o.o And thanks for the rating. Bad ocg This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn' date=' you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Normal Summon any monsters. Fixed.[/quote'] Thank you for fixing it. Updated the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Wll, to make it more ballanced, you should change the "Normal Summon' to just plain Summon. Ps. And with Special Summoner, I mean something like "The Creator". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 lol, np bro ^_\\\ For an "Immortal", it's rather balanced. Still kind of strong, but compared to the others, it's pretty nice =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Wll' date=' to make it more ballanced, you should change the "Normal Summon' to just plain Summon. Ps. And with Special Summoner, I mean something like "The Creator".[/quote'] Yeah I was thinking of doing that. I am will make another version with just "Summon" instead of "Normal Summon". :D And oh, I know what you mean. But come on, what are the chances of that. :P lol' date=' np bro ^_\\\ For an "Immortal", it's rather balanced. Still kind of strong, but compared to the others, it's pretty nice =D[/quote'] Thanks. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I like the new version.A 9/10, now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Seems balanced, pic is nice. 7,4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I like the new version.A 9/10' date=' now[/quote'] Woot. :D Seems balanced' date=' pic is nice. 7,4/10[/quote'] Thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 I'd increase the drawback. Say as long as it's on the field you can't normal summon and have to pay 700 LP you special summon a monster 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 I'd increase the drawback. Say as long as it's on the field you can't normal summon and have to pay 700 LP you special summon a monster 7/10 What do you mean exactly? Do you mean make it so I have to pay life points to summon a monster? Or do you mean.. add an effect where you can pay life points to special summon a monster? But that would go against the card's original effect. Thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Everything seems fine to me. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Everything seems fine to me. 9/10 Thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 The seconde version is pretty good. But... for a "Immortal" monster it's second effect make it a little OP thought. :? But yeah, not bad. :DThe image is good, not awesome but pretty good. ;) Rate - 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopla Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 The seconde version is pretty good. But... for a "Immortal" monster it's second effect make it a little OP thought. :? But yeah' date=' not bad. :DThe image is good, not awesome but pretty good. ;) Rate - 8.4/10[/quote'] Thanks, I am thinking of adding/changing something on this card. So wait for that. :P EDIT: [spoiler=[b]Koraz the Immortal: Version 3 (Added Something to the Effect)[/b]] Effect:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can send 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by half the ATK of the sent monster until the End Phase. As long as you control this face-up card, you cannot Normal Summon any monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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