zorio 28 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 do you like my new card? feel free to coment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dils Dileva Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 I do not like the first one, and it's badly spelled. Sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Nope i dont like em 5/10OP'ed like hell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted October 2, 2009 Report Share Posted October 2, 2009 Hey, this must be one of your first cards so I'm going to take it lightly, that way you will continue to go on and become a succesfull card maker. First of all, the picture.If you look at real YuGiOh cards, you will see a -slight- esscence of cartoon in them. That's the type of picture you should use. Second...You have some minor spelling mistakes-check through them. Third...Um...well...Aha!You see, this is how it should be... While this card is face-up on the field it is treated as an effect monster with this effect:This card is treated as Winged-Beast WIND-Type monster that gains 1000 ATK for each monster on the field (not including this card). Quatro...I mean Fourthly, I mean Finally...Its OPed(Overpowered). I am not going to rate it because I would rate it low. However, I hope I don't discourage you. Go on and become a great card maker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 you should have made it 0 def then. Probably your first attempt at a trap monster, which for someone new it's still reasonable. You just need to give it some more effects, along with the lv of the trap monster and such 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Just to elaborate a bit on what ragnarok said, if you have a monster with "?" as its DEF, it has to have an effect explaining what its DEF depends on. If you aren't going to do that, you have to give it a definite amount. There are also some OCG errors, see Oleon's post for the corrections. Keep on making and (especially) looking at cards and you'll get used to proper OCG and well-balanced effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Yes, I concur with the previous posts.Also, if you're trying to make a trap/spell monster (or tokens), you use this format: "word word word word (???-Type/????/Level ???/ATK ???/DEF ???), where the first ??? is the type, the second is the attribute, the third the level, and the fourth and fifth the ATK and DEF, respectively.The effect is also OP'ed (over-powered). For example, in your ideal situation, the field will be full, which means 9 other monsters. That would give this card 9300 ATK. Is that right? No. If you made it 200 ATK for every monster, however, it would have a whopping total of 2100 ATK, in a full house, which is fine, don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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