Sea monster : absolute power

[→мαthєus.]

These card's I made for my "Sea Terror" Deck.

(Fixed By Άř¢ħėłäűŝ)

[spoiler=Ocean's Wrath][spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Summoned while "Umi" is face-up on the field. If "Umi" is returned to its owner's hand or Deck, this card's ATK and DEF are 0. If "Umi" is destroyed, destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field, all non-Fish, Sea-Serpent or Aqua-Type monsters can only be Summoned if "Island" is face-up on the field. When this card attacks a monster in "Island" Zone, switch that monster to Defense Position. This card inflicts Piercing Damage.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Island][spoiler=Lore]This card only can be activated if you control "Umi”. Place this card face-up on your opponent’s Field Spell Card Zone. If "Umi" is destroyed, this card's name is treated as "Wasteland". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the Monster Card Zones of non-Fish, Sea-Serpent and Aqua-Type monsters are treated as "Island" Zones. Monsters in "Island" Zones are unaffected by the effects of "Umi".

 

 

[.Leo]

interesting. the OCG is hard to fix because of the concept. maybe wait for an experinced OCg master help you. nice effetcs. they are really interesting. i thought Umi had died but with the current buzz about it it seems to be coming back =D

 

~9/10~

[→мαthєus.]

Have OCG errors?

:shock:

I consulted the OCG/Grammar Thread

LOL

 

about UMI maan ... IT is the Absolute Power ;D

 

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I'll have to leave about 17 at clock (Brasilia's hour) 'cause my lil' brotha will use the pc

 

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~Bump!!!!

 

keep commenting

 

i'm off here

 

Byee

[Maliki]

I luv these bro 9/10

[→мαthєus.]

Thx a lot

 

;D

[→мαthєus.]

BUMP

 

please comment

 

:(

[ragnarok1945]

only problem with Monstrous Sea Serpent is it still needs specific summoning requirments. It's not THAT hard to get Umi to the field, and after that it's just some 2 tribute monster

 

8/10

[→мαthєus.]

So it's OP'd?

 

if i change to 3 Tributes would resolve?

[ragnarok1945]

it would certainly balance it. Personally I think even 3 is still too easy to summon

[Big Lez]

Very nice cards dude..

 

hmm

Im not experienced enough to fix your OCG 100% correctly i think..so

I dont know how to word the "All non Fish-Type, Aqua -Type .... " effect better. i think you could keep it that way, so far

 

The effects are good, the pics are good enough...9/10

[→мαthєus.]

it would certainly balance it. Personally I think even 3 is still too easy to summon

 

But is not hard to destroy "UMI" or return it to it'd owner's hand or Deck (like Giant Trunade's effect) and it makes it useless ;D

 

BUT if I reduce its ATK and DEF??

 

Very nice cards dude..

 

hmm

Im not experienced enough to fix your OCG 100% correctly i think..so

I dont know how to word the "All non Fish-Type' date=' Aqua -Type .... " effect better. i think you could keep it that way, so far

 

The effects are good, the pics are good enough...9/10

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I didn't understand what you meant

 

sry my English id not that well but ...

 

;D

 

BUT thanks

[Maliki]

Thx a lot

 

;D

 

 

Your Welcome

[Archelaus]

FIX:

1-> Monstrous Serpent:

This card can only be Summoned while "Umi" is face-up on the field. If "Umi" is returned to its owner's hand or Deck, this card's ATK and DEF are 0. If "Umi" is destroyed, destroy this card. While this card is face-up on the field, all non-Fish, Sea-Serpent or Aqua-Type monsters can only be Summoned if "Island" is face-up on the field. When this card attacks a monster in "Island" Zone, switch that monster to Defense Position. If this card battles a monster with a DEF lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Island Zone is accepted since it is written in the Island's Lore.

 

2-> Island

FIX: This card only can be activated if you control "Umi”. When this card is activated, "Umi" is not destroyed (Place this card face-up on your opponent’s Field Spell Card Zone). If "Umi" is destroyed, this card's name is treated as "Wasteland". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the Monster Card Zones of non-Fish, Sea-Serpent and Aqua-Type monsters are treated as "Island" Zones. Monsters in "Island" Zones are unaffected by the effects of "Umi".

 

I recommend making this into a Continuous Spell Card, but it's up to you.

 

Pics aren't that good. Concept is good.

 

9/10

[→мαthєus.]

Thanks a lot maan

 

i was waiting for someone as skilled as you to correct it

 

;D

[Mindscatter]

So...what I understand from your cards is this: your sea serpent extremely weakens your opponent, but then comes Island to help him? Weird...

[→мαthєus.]

KKK' you got it all

 

but the effect of Monstrous Sea Serpent is to destroy monsters in Island Zone and smash your life points got it?

[Archelaus]

I had an error in the first card's Fix. I fixed it again.

[→мαthєus.]

thank you again

 

 

maybe ill find other pic on deviant art

 

 

i'm fixing it right now

 

I'll reduce First Card's ATK cause Overchking said its OP'ed

 

what do ya think?

[Archelaus]

Make it 2800. Then replace the last sentence of the effect with this:

"This card inflicts Piercing Damage."

[Maliki]

way better bro

[→мαthєus.]

so what that means?

 

sorry i didn't understand the Piercing thing

 

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[Mindscatter]

Well now there is a real Konami card that has "piercing" in its effect, so you can just say piercing.

[Archelaus]

Instead of the last sentence, you can just write "This card inflicts Piercing Damage."

 

It's a real term.

[→мαthєus.]

but what piercing means?

 

i'm not from USA my English's not that well

 

i didn't understand what piercing means

 

;D

[Archelaus]

Piercing means breaking through armor/defenses and inflicting damage to an enemy.