Akira Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Here it is, the Wasp Deity! Doom dozer was nice but I wanted an insect that was as powerful as a sacred beast... for some obscure reason! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 awsome job, but grammar needs some work. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 awsome job' date=' but grammar needs some work. 9/10[/quote'] yeah i agreaa, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 9/10 IT ROCKS DUDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 i like it :)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akira Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Thanks for the compliments... it would help if you let me know which areas of grammar need improving rather than just saying that it's wrong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 in the following effects its not clear if you do all of them or choose one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akira Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Read it again and you'll see that I wrote "1 of the following effects"- its perfectly clear XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Thanks for the compliments... it would help if you let me know which areas of grammar need improving rather than just saying that it's wrong! ok really the grammar isnt all that bad, you just have to capitalize, things like Graveyard, Life Points, Insect-Type Monster, and hmmm Special Summon, etc, :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 just a few OCG errors but still cool4.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 You should list the effects with bulletpoints. Like so:>>> Other than that, a few minor grammatical errors, but it's a good card. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
basariosvolcanis Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 dah 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byere Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Insects rule :D Anyway, I liked the card myself (though I personally see nothing wrong with the grammer... looooooooong az it dinna l00k liek diz lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 The cards effect os great but can you get a different picture, the wasp doesn't look....fiece enough..... Other than that great! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 29, 2007 Report Share Posted November 29, 2007 Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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