Set {3/??}

[Eury]

Cards I will be making out of boredom. Some will support each other and some won't. As for my Demon Angel set I don't know when I'll continue that, if I continue at all.

 

[align=center][spoiler=[b]Swamp Serpent[/b]]

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot Special Summoned except by removing 2 or more Reptile-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Any battle damage involving this card is reduced to 0. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of Reptile-Type monsters on the field x 700. During each of your End Phases you must pay 500 Life Points (this is not optional) and inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Ice Golem[/b]]

[spoiler=Lore]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned switch every monster on the field to Defense Position (except this card). This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent return 1 card on the field to it's owner's hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect return every card on the field to their owner's hand.

 

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Polbo Mal (Evil Octopus in Galician)[/b]]

[spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned pay 1000 Life Points (this is not optional). During each of your Standby Phases you can Special Summon 1 Lv6 or lower Fish-Type monster from your hand or Deck. During your End Phase if you did not attack with a Lv5 or higher monster this turn you can Special Summon 1 Lv5 or lower Fish-Type monster from your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, destroy the monster that destroyed this card.

 

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[ragnarok1945]

Ice Golem looks more machine than rock

 

for Swamp Serpent, to better balance it I'd have changed the burn effect to you burn your opponent by 700 pts, you must also pay 700 LP

 

8/10

[Eury]

ty and bump

[Eury]

-.- bump...again

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

It ain't that bad and I agree with ragnarok1945's post

[~Shin~]

[spoiler=Swamp Serpent]

7/10

good pic and sort of new effect not bad at all but you have 2 errors:

"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by"

change " inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points."

to " Inflict 700 damage to your opponent."

it is not realy error but it look better in the second way.

 

[spoiler=Ice Golem]

8.5/10

great pic I like it can you PM it to me ?

effect is great toit have no errors but you may like to:

change it to Machine type.

change "every" TO "all".

make it request Machine type to be summon.

 

[spoiler=Polbo Mal]

8.5/10

pic is not bad effect is new I realy like it but still have some errors but I fix it "During the End Phase of a turn that you did not attack with a Level 5 or higher monster you can Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Fish-Type monster from your Graveyard.

and you may like to add "This card cannot be Special Summoned." to the effect

 

[Archelaus]

They're balanced. They're great but I cannot feel the synergy among the three.

 

8.7/10

[Eury]

Like I said some won't support and some will. Thanks for the rate. :D