Bubblin Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Just made my first card with long lore Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This cannot be special summoned except by removing from play 3 monsters with 'Prophecy' in their card name. When this card attacks a monster on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK lower than the amount of monster cards in your graveyard x200, your opponent must send 1 tuner type monster from their deck to the graveyard. If your opponent does not have any tuner type monsters in their deck your opponent loses 300 life points for every card in their hand. If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard due to an effect controlled by your opponent using a tuner or synchro type monster this monster must be special summoned with 1900 ATK and DEF points during your opponent's standby phase on the 2nd turn after this card being destroyed. Is my OCG OK?Comment and rate please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 OCG FIX:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 monsters with "Prophecy" in their card name you control. When this card attacks a monster on your opponent controls with an ATK lower than the number of monsters in your Graveyard x200, your opponent sends 1 Tuner monster from their Deck to the Graveyard. If he/she cannot, they take 300 damage for each card in their hand. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a Tuner or Synchro monster's effect, Special Summon this card with 1900 ATK and DEF during your opponent's next Standby Phase. This is Better^^ 5/10, 8.9/10 if corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubblin Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 thanks for fix tyler will change it soon Any more comments people? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 tyler already pointed out the OCG errors, overall for the effect it's not too bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 The OCG has been corrected and the effect is balanced, not to OP or UP so your good in that part but not the OCG. I would classify the card as being a fiend or zombie, not warrior going by what the pic looks like. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 9/10 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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