Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Hope you like it ^^ the vetala is an evil spirit who haunts cemeteries and takes demonic possession of corpses. They make their displeasure known by troubling humans. They can drive people mad, kill children, and cause miscarriages, but also guard villages.They are hostile spirits of the dead trapped in the 'twilight zone' between life and afterlife. These creatures can be repelled by the chanting of holy spells. One can free them from their ghostly existence by performing their funerary rites. Being unaffected by the laws of space and time, they have an uncanny knowledge about the past, present, and future and a deep insight into human nature. Therefore many sorcerers seek to capture them and turn them into slaves. nooooteeh iiitt ^^still no one? :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karasu45 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 intresting but long lore man ^^ 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 no other commands? any votes? :(( (thx kara) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 It's an interesting description, but a bit too long, and its 5 stars o,o 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 3 minor problems with this card:1. Its a vanilla. People don't like vanillas.2. It doesn't need to be 5 stars (You could see cards like this more in the older TCG sets)3. Change 'FIRST EDITION' to '1st Edition' (I know the caps lock can't be changed on this part of the card. Try editing the card with something). Then give it a gold sticker. Either that or don't make it 'FIRST EDITION' at all. I'll give you a 5/10. You at least (hopefully) put some effort into the lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 who cares it made the card and you dont say me how to make it and you are saying "people don't vanillas" soo where are those people except you? i dont what i want becaus its my card and i put wich edition i want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 who cares it made the card and you dont say me how to make it and you are saying "people don't vanillas" soo where are those people except you? i dont what i want becaus its my card and i put wich edition i want In my day, this card would get so flamed for being Vanilla and proud. Points for a long lore though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 2000 ATK and 4 stars is a bit too OP'd. Either lower the ATK to 1900 or increase the level to 5 stars ;).Pic is Epic Win. Lore is very interesting. I can't give more reps today, but you will get one :P @Dr{}ne:There are enough people who like vanillas. I am one of them. And I reward people for making decent vanillas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 fixed it ^^ and thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 that's one hell of a lore for a vanilla, but I'm still giving you only 4/10 due to lack of support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted October 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 lol btw ranga why you never maked 1 card? i like to see ur own card and note them too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted October 3, 2009 Report Share Posted October 3, 2009 Cool card nice name and one heck of a long text...Bit much with the killing of children and miscarriages!! lol. Nice pic and average ATK/DEF points for a lvl4 Normal Monster. I like a good vanilla, I like to read an interesting piece of text under em. It really brings a set to life sometimes I think, but thats just my huble opinion. Why is everyone sooo quick to dump on everyone elses cards, yeah if your gonna pick up on a wrong then reward a right!! You can see time and effort has gone into making this card and that should be what you focus on, how creative it is, from an effect to a text entry not the fact the card is Yellow instead of Orange....so I say go Vanillas go WOOP WOOP!! Good work player 9/10, keep it up!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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