lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Hey. These are just the first two cards i've made out of a set of about 10 or 12 I do not own the pictures, They were found on google images when searching "(the colour of the dragon) Dragon". Not sure if they're over used, probably. The OCG might be a bit bad, as I haven't made cards in a while. Anyway, tell me what you think This card can not be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned when "Fedilitay, the Opal Dragon of Faith" is face up on your side of the field. During each of your Battle Phases, you and your opponent can draw 1 card from your respective decks. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can pay 1000 Life Points to return it to your hand. (In Fidilitay's effect, should I change the LP cost? Or is it good?) During each of your Battle Phases, your opponent tosses a coin. If heads, this card must attack your opponent (unless an effect of a Spell, Trap or effect monster prevents the attack). If tails, this card can not attack the turn the effect is activated. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to roll a die. If you roll a 1 or 4, your Life Points equal your opponents. If you roll a 2 or 6, your opponents Life Points equal your Life Points. If you roll a 3 or 5, you and your opponents Life Points are decreased by 500. When this card sends an opponents monster to the Graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 card in your opponents hand. If it is a Spell or Trap card, send it to the Graveyard. If it is a monster, the opponents Life Points are decreased by half the amount of the monsters ATK, and send the monster to the Graveyard. This card is unaffected by Spell cards. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, it is placed at the bottom of your deck. In addition you can move the top card on the opponents deck to the bottom. As long as this card is face up on the field, only 1 monster can attack per turn. When this card is Special Summoned, you can look at the opponents hand and select 1 card and replace it with 1 card from your opponents deck. Shuffle the deck afterwards. This card can not be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to increase this cards ATK by 1000. If you do, this card is sent to the Graveyard at the end of your End Phase. This card can only be Normal Summoned when there is a face up Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field. When this card is in face up Defence Position, increase the DEF of all monster cards on the field by 200. This card can be used as two tributes to tribute summon the cards whose name contain 'Dragon of'. Send this card to Graveyard along with any Level 4 Dragon-Type card, to Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type Card from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. For Derenu, I have three cards with different Pictures because one was overused, can you tell me which one you think works best? Thanks Paton, the Crystal Dragon of Patience + Any card whose name contains 'Dragon of'.When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned, you send all Spell and Trap cards on the opponents side of the field to the Graveyard. In addition, the ATK of all monster Cards on your side of the field is increased by 100 for every Spell or Trap Card sent to the Graveyard due to thsi cards effect. (I think some of the OCG for these three cards went out the window, (you see its early in the morning here) so would it bother you to help me a little bit?) When this card is Special Summoned, you can draw cards equal to the number of Spell and Trap cards face up on the opponents side of the field. The effect for this card was thought up in a rush so it may NOT be the best. You have been warned! :P ThanksLindz Rox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xcam Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 this is cool 9.9999999/10lolthe effect is just fine it is awesomethe effect is just fine it is awesome:-):-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 this is cool 9.9999999/10lolthe effect is just fine it is awesomethe effect is just fine it is awesome:-):-) Why thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OCG is good. Pic is okay. The effect seems little little OP's 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OCG is good. Pic is okay. The effect seems little little OP's 8/10 How do u think it could be improved? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Jade dragon pic needs cropping so no white is shown. you TOSS a coin not flip one.Opal dragon effect is too simple. and all the "MAY" should be "CAN" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OCG is good. Pic is okay. The effect seems little little OP's 8/10 I agree with this post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Jade dragon pic needs cropping so no white is shown. you TOSS a coin not flip one.Opal dragon effect is too simple. and all the "MAY" should be "CAN" Ok, thanks.Of course you don't flip a coin :P so silly, oops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mo_etsh Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 i like the pics (excluding the last one).....pretty good however8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 i like the pics (excluding the last one).....pretty good however8/10 Ok, I'm going to find a beeter picture for Sinara. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Pics are semi-bad. OCG needs a little work. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Pics are semi-bad. OCG needs a little work. 8/10 How are the pics "Semi-bad"? just need to know, so i can improve Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Feilitay's effect is a bit too plain, everything else is reasonable 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Feilitay's effect is a bit too plain' date=' everything else is reasonable 9/10[/quote'] Thank you. How should I make it not plain? If I were to link it to Veritii it may become Over powered... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Added Onyx Dragon. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 It's better if they were in Spoilers. OCG seems fine. Some Pics are OU(Over Used). 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 It's better if they were in Spoilers. OCG seems fine. Some Pics are OU(Over Used). 8.4/10 May I ask what spoilers is? and which pics are OU? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Added Ruby Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Ruby Dragon's effect is far too dull, it needs to have another one to spice things up 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Ruby Dragon's effect is far too dull' date=' it needs to have another one to spice things up 7/10[/quote'] ok, will add another effect! thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 the same is true for your new card Paton, its effect is too dull 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 the same is true for your new card Paton' date=' its effect is too dull 7/10[/quote'] OK, ill do it soon as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Ok, redone the effects of crystal and ruby dragons to "spice" things up. don't know how spiced u want 'em though haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slayer360123 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Nice...how many more dragons have you made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Perfecto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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