phillofantiock Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Hi. I'm new here so I was wondering if people could point out the flaws in my cards and perhaps tell me how realistic my "Ultimate Negation" booster pack is? Thanks =) Both players must discard all trap cards in their hands when this card is activated. Negate the activation of all Trap Cards (except this one) and destroy them. Both players must discard all magic cards in their hands when this card is activated. Negate the activation of all Spell Cards (except this one) and destroy them. When this card is Summoned (except by Special Summon) both players must discard all Monster Effect Cards in their hands. While this card is face up on the field, when the effect of an Effect Monster Card is activated (except this card), negate the effect. "Magician of Level Out" + "Ritual of Magical Barrier" + "Ritual of Trap Eating Rift"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is summoned, both players must discard all cards from their hands except Normal Monster cards. When a Spell or Trap Card is activated, or the effect of an Effect Monster is activated (except this card), that activation is negated. If I haven't updated my cards for your critisism just yet, I have either decided to make a new card comepletely instead, or I will get round to it soon =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Don't use attachments. When you're done making your card, click it. A code shoudl appear beneath it. Copy and paste that into your thread. Once you've done that, I'll comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Ugh .... 0/10 for using attachments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krondalix Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 First see: Don't attach the images use a imageshack.us or zimagez.com site to get them on your post without click. Ritual of Trap Eating is like a Royal Decree so find something new ^^; Same for the Magical Destruction. I propose one card that do the two effects with some restrictions. Your Magician is quite too similar from your Rituals cards i think. The picture of the last one is from the anime i suggest another one because the name would be "Dark Magician Girl". Quite good pictures anyway, the effort is here so 5.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Please do not use attachments. [/thread] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillofantiock Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Thanks for your comments everyone =)I see what you mean about Royal Decree btw, and a more powerful card with more resrictions seems like a good idea xDI shall get to work on adding them as images then. Thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Thanks for your comments everyone =)Lolz. We're not giving you positive comments. We're telling you that you screwed up when you posted your cards so ..... please fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillofantiock Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Thanks for your comments everyone =)Lolz. We're not giving you positive comments. We're telling you that you screwed up when you posted your cards so ..... please fix that. Well I meant thanks for the critisisms then. Besides, I think that's all done now... All the same, pleanty of time to make better and more origional cards yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Please do not post attachments!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Please do not post attachments!!!!!!!!!!! He changed it, stupid. I like them, a few OCg errors, and unoriginal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Second card is broken. 4.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillofantiock Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 What do you mean "the second card is broken"? =oIs that in a literal sence, or that it's not very good? Also... As i'm a bit of an idiot, could someone please explain what "OCG" is? Is that the language used in the card or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OCG is Official Card Grammar. Broken that it is too Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillofantiock Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OCG is Official Card Grammar. Broken that it is too Overpowered. Ah yes... That it is...So my main aim is to work on making them slightly less powerful and more origional then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Yeah you should. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I'd remove card2 right away, too OPed 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 The second card is no different than Horus Lv8's effect, so you can't go around saying they're OP'ed when cards of them already exist.On that note, cards of these already exist. Royal Decree does the first one's effect, just doesn't destroy them and lets them take up space in the field to hinder your opponent. Also, there is a magic counterpart to that as well, which replaces card #2.Card 3's effect is OP'ed. Not being able to use effect monsters is too much. Also, you can't fuse a magic, trap, and monster, so the fusion is out of the question, not to mention OP'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 The second card is no different than Horus Lv8's effect' date=' so you can't go around saying they're OP'ed when cards of them already exist.On that note, cards of these already exist. Royal Decree does the first one's effect, just doesn't destroy them and lets them take up space in the field to hinder your opponent. Also, there is a magic counterpart to that as well, which replaces card #2.Card 3's effect is OP'ed. Not being able to use effect monsters is too much. Also, you can't fuse a magic, trap, and monster, so the fusion is out of the question, not to mention OP'ed.[/quote'] Spot on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 The second card is no different than Horus Lv8's effect' date=' so you can't go around saying they're OP'ed when cards of them already exist.On that note, cards of these already exist. Royal Decree does the first one's effect, just doesn't destroy them and lets them take up space in the field to hinder your opponent. Also, there is a magic counterpart to that as well, which replaces card #2.Card 3's effect is OP'ed. Not being able to use effect monsters is too much. Also, you can't fuse a magic, trap, and monster, so the fusion is out of the question, not to mention OP'ed.[/quote'] Card 2 is broken because it's Imperial Order without a drawback. And Imperial Order is banned. <.< So it is really OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phillofantiock Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Seems like everyone is in agreement on that, and looking through my own deck (15 spell cards) I can see why! Fair enough. So the Fusion monster is illegal for now, the 2nd card is overpowered x10 to the max, the 3rd card is overcooking the playdoh and the 1st card already exists. It seems like I have a while to go before I'm making good, origional and realistic cards xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 If Imperial Order is banned, then card 2 is OP.Besides that the pic are mediocre and the but the effects are ok.A 8/10, for making Vanilla Support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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