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This set couldn't fault in my existance around YCM

 

i simply LOVE Warrior and Beast-Warrior-Type monsters

 

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[spoiler=Leader]280522g.jpg[spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to Special Summon 1 "Sword Hero" monster with the same Level as the Tributed card from your Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, "Sword Hero" monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=Marechal]280522s.jpg[spoiler=Lore]"Sword Hero - Leader Samurai" + "Sword Hero - Werewolf Doubles"

This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing the above cards you control from play (You do not use "Polymerization"). This card returns to the Fusion Deck during the End Phase of the turn it was Special Summoned. During your Battle Phase, destroy all "Sword Hero" monsters you control (except this card) and activate 1 of the following effects according to the number of monsters you destroyed by this effect:

●1: Increase this card's ATK by 700 during this turn.

●2: Destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on the field.

●3: Your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards during this turn.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=Reinforcement Squad 1]280522ny.jpg[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. Increase this card's ATK by 700 for each "Sword Hero" monster (except this card) you control.

 

 

 

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[spoiler=Reinforcement Squad 2]280522i.jpg[spoiler=Lore]If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of "Sword Hero - Holy Prayer", this card's ATK is 3000 instead of 2100. When this card battles a DARK monster, the monster is destroyed without Damage Calculation. If this card battles a LIGHT monster, descrease this card's ATK by 1000 during the Damage Step only.

 

 

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Fixes:

1st) Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to Special Summon 1 "Sword Hero" monster with the same Level as the Tributed card from your Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, "Sword Hero" monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF.

 

2nd) Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can discard 1 card to have this card attack twice during this turn.

 

5th) This card cannot attack unless you pay 500 Life Points.

 

6th card is OP.

 

7th) destory = destroy

 

8.4/10

 

I was too tired to check the last two cards. It's 11 PM here.

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Well, I'm not a fan of heroes, at all.

 

But, as I am somewhat proffecional by now, personal likings of an archetype should not come in the way of rating a nice set properly.

 

And this set is actually very nice. :)

 

You might want to reconsider making your Soldier 1 a Flip effect card, as that makes it very underpowered. Soldier 2 will also be destroyed quickly before you can inflct damage with it, unless you use Shrink or something of the like, of course.

 

Another thing I noticed, an official Archetype usually has a niche to work with, something that is similar on the cards, and the effects of these cards seem to cover an extremely wide, and rather random scale. By this, I mean you have for example 1 that cannot attack unless you pay 500 Life Points, another thing can attack two times if you discard a card.

 

I see of course that some of the cards in the set support the Archetype, but that is only a very strict select few, and some of them again, can only help 1 of the cards of the archetype, so try adding more similarity and basic support.

 

I've said mine.

 

Good job, none the less. ^_^

 

G.

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Well' date=' I'm not a fan of heroes, at all.

 

But, as I am somewhat proffecional by now, personal likings of an archetype should not come in the way of rating a nice set properly.

 

And this set is actually very nice. :)

 

You might want to reconsider making your Soldier 1 a Flip effect card, as that makes it very underpowered. Soldier 2 will also be destroyed quickly before you can inflct damage with it, unless you use Shrink or something of the like, of course.

 

Another thing I noticed, an official Archetype usually has a niche to work with, something that is similar on the cards, and the effects of these cards seem to cover an extremely wide, and rather random scale. By this, I mean you have for example 1 that cannot attack unless you pay 500 Life Points, another thing can attack two times if you discard a card.

 

I see of course that some of the cards in the set support the Archetype, but that is only a very strict select few, and some of them again, can only help 1 of the cards of the archetype, so try adding more similarity and basic support.

 

I've said mine.

 

Good job, none the less. ^_^

 

G.

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ok, i didn't understand it very well what did you mean ?

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