cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Fallen Angel's!!![spoiler=Charukia]EFFECT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 Spell Cards from your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned return all face-down cards on the field to their owners hands. Once per turn by removing from play 1 Trap Card from your hand this card can attack directly. When this card inflicts damage increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300. [spoiler=Dark Past]Yes i know bland effect but its in a set so its ok, well in my opinion [spoiler=Majestic Cur]EFFECT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Fallen-Angel". Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points for this card to attack directly. When this effect is used remove 1 Trap Card from your hand from play. If you cannot this effect cannot be used. [spoiler=Mask]EFFECT:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to 1 face-up "Fallen Angle" as an Equip Card. OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this cards effect, increase the ATK of the equiped monster by 1200.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. if the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead.) Rising Angel's!!![spoiler=sky leader]The ATK is suppose to be 1950 but the card maker wont let me enter mor then 2 numbers for the atk, dont know why it didnt happen for the others [spoiler=light giver] [spoiler=Golden Crusade]EFFECT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Rising Angel". Once per turn by removing from play 2 Trap Cards from your Graveyard select 1 card from your opponents Graveyard and add it to your hand. If the selected card is a Spell Card increase your Life Points by 500 and remove from play 2 cards from your hand. If the selected card is a Trap Card, decrease both players Life Points by 1000. If the selected card is a Monster Card destroy this card. Spells and Trapssome of these are new and some are just a collection of some that i have used in sets in the past[spoiler=card slasher] [spoiler=Evil Spears] [spoiler=Angel Power] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Ok well first thing check over each of your cards again most of them have small card errors (ex. last card needs a continuous symbol on it) and Rising Angel - Sky Leader has a ridiculous ATK (19 ATK) and also since you didn't specify that you can't target Rising Angel - Light Giver with its own effect, then that makes that card a pretty cheap card also. Your Fallen Angel - Churukia is very easy to summon especially when it doesn't specify what type of cards you can only remove from your graveyard so anything can be removed from your graveyard to summon it and its effect is ridiculous and pretty powerful for a remove 2 cards to summon monster. It's effect of it being able to attack your opponent directly is really unclear and I have no clue how it would be activated espcially when the information given for it is pretty vague. So far these need work only a few of them are well made. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Ok well first thing check over each of your cards again most of them have small card errors (ex. last card needs a continuous symbol on it) and Rising Angel - Sky Leader has a ridiculous ATK (19 ATK) and also since you didn't specify that you can't target Rising Angel - Light Giver with its own effect' date=' then that makes that card a pretty cheap card also. Your Fallen Angel - Churukia is very easy to summon especially when it doesn't specify what type of cards you can only remove from your graveyard so anything can be removed from your graveyard to summon it and its effect is ridiculous and pretty powerful for a remove 2 cards to summon monster. It's effect of it being able to attack your opponent directly is really unclear and I have no clue how it would be activated espcially when the information given for it is pretty vague. So far these need work only a few of them are well made. 7/10[/quote'] ok for the 19 atk thing you obviously you dont read, it says why its 19 atk im not explaing since your to stupid to read things. and for the charukia thing, the effect is messed up ill fix that ill the rest soon as welland whats wrong with light giver Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 First things first.Charukia's effect says: "Once per turn by removing from play this card can attack directly", I don't get it.Rising Angel- Light Giver's summonig requerments aren't there.So I really can't rate becouse I don't know if the above is UP or OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 for light giver its conditions are there it can only be summoned by the effect of "Melting Heart" and im working on charukias effect now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 ok corrections made and for the sky leader i cant fix it, the atk is suppose to be 1950 but its messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 for Churukia you didn't say where the trap has to be removed from play from to get it to attack your opponent directly, which makes it OPed for Sky Leader, why does it have an atk of only 19? 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 sorry for churukia i forgot to state it has to be removed from your hand ill change that and i said like 4 times why its 19, the card maker was screwing up and it wont let me chnage it i also forgot to save it so i cant edit right away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 all right, then with the modifications I'll raise the rate to 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 ok ill be updating soon so when i do make sure to check back iwell if you want to that is you dont have to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I like chukuria, but nothing else, sadly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 updated 1 spell card added ill add i more monster for both soon!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Any rates? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Angel Power's effect is a bit dull compared to the others, can you give it another one? 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 um ya sure hold on i have school so when i come back there will be 4 new angles and 3 new spells and traps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Pics:Your Pics are awsome!Good Graphics, that totally fit in the game. (well the first might not..But it just looks great!)Effects: Good Average..One thing..The name of "Angel Power" is a bit pointless / unoriginal..But no problem to me... 8/10 I like em! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 thank you i see your a 5 star now congratzupdated 1 fallen angel added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Perfecto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 thanks' \i love spam rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 bump 1 new fallen angel added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 is it the punishment mask one? Because if yes it looks well balanced and the pic suits it nicely 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 is it the punishment mask one? Because if yes it looks well balanced and the pic suits it nicely 9/10 yes it is thx for rating anymore ratings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Cards seems fine. Set is quite interesting as well. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 thx for rating anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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