fazil95 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 It's My First Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 First off that PICTURE IS EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but you have terable OCG oh well read this and use it you should be Able to get it if you Fallow these ruels http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlPicture +3OCG -3Originality -2EXTRA:First card +25/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Tnat is 1 Great Pic. may be to OverPowered, maybe add something like "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 face-up "Dark Magician" and 1 "Spellbinding Circle"?A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Um...MAJOR OCGs there, epic picture, dark is not a card type, i suggest spellcaster, and also though it dosn't have much of an effect it's a bit OPed. 4/10 from me for the actual card.10/10 on the picture though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Dark isn't a real type, make it spellcaster OCG errors, and WAY too bland and OPed effect 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 good picture grammer needs some work but for a first acrd 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 pic is nice the effect is OPedfor its effect i would do something like This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters on your side of the field. As long as this card is face-up on the field decrease the ATK of all non-Spellcaster-Type monsters by 500 and the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monsters by 300. this is just a suggestion you don't have to use if you don't want do. but any ways good card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 This card is okay. Remember OCG and No overpowering. Well in my book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffee Black Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 pic is nice the effect is OPedfor its effect i would do something like This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters on your side of the field. As long as this card is face-up on the field decrease the ATK of all non-Spellcaster-Type monsters by 500 and the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monsters by 300. this is just a suggestion you don't have to use if you don't want do. but any ways good card 7/10 I'll give my rating based on this effect since it's obviously better. 7.5/10 since it only would have 2700 ATK of it's own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 OK...fake type, short effect, OCG errorsbut the pic is very good, so...6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Its overpowered but heres ocgAs long as this card is face-up on your field, decrease the ATK of all of your opponent's monsters by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sreaper409 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 not that great.... still its just your first time so don't worry about it... the image is cool but the text isn't that great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Amazing image, but wasted on this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fartomatic Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Great image but bad ocg and there is no such card type as dark.The text needs some work 4 a card of that power it should have like this card card cannot be normal summoned anyway i give it a 6/10 it is your first go.on my first card i got like 60% 0/10 20% -10/10 10%1/10 and 10%2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 OCG FIX: While this card is on the field, all monsters on the field lose 500 ATK. OP. Pic is epic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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