Kane Reiger Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Please tell me if I used incorrect grammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 The image is quite old but i suppose you wouldn't know. Your new so I wont take off as many points as I normally would. Its Grammar is terrible (no offense). OCG Fix:"Once per turn, inflict 200 points of damage x the number of Fiend-Type monsters you control, to your opponent." It's effect is quite dull and uncreative. You seem to be restraining your creativity. Don't. Just think of anything and put it down. This is the place to be creative. Well 5/10 Keep working on it and I know it'll end up being MUCH better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kane Reiger Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Yeah I slapped this together kinda fast just to get the hang of the tools. I've got some others in the works that should be done pretty soon, so heres hopin for something awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 minor burn effect, and it's not like other cards can't do something like this already, you should add another to this 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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