megakenny Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 My first set since i came back and they are proly crap but i dont care cos it's trail and error IMG credithttp://s.bebo.com/app-image/6792590486/6104374626/PROFILE/www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/21648Dark_Dragon_RPC.jpg IMG credithttp://static.desktopnexus.com/wallpapers/26169-bigthumbnail.jpg img credithttp://c2.api.ning.com/files/Pti0cgNyOfWfpHp1-Nn-bE05BZW8OibpGHkxrGmb2qA5QdCDcuocW8Hf9vPLByAAhjRPPZgej8uE*lkMwJQlyJxkoc-0Ek-2/BlackDragon.jpg img credithttp://api.ning.com/files/Z1vXmJXmomXRdDBmvnycsAMmMCdY9jWRyGMOLCM7G0CWhg7EFBVWXU1ZtkVveeqp7v7DHLjBYdtp4DkaX*wFoqeDHZN-l8nr/BlackDragonTNT.jpg http://fc01.deviantart.com/images3/i/2004/115/d/a/black_dragon.jpg img credithttp://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk78/irismaria_01/gotico/3_headed_cyber_dragon_by_Ironshod.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal-ice-mirrors Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Eh... pretty good. Original card grammar is something you'll definitely need to fix. The fusion monsters were a little hard to understand. Are the fusion-materials Destructor Dragon or any cards with Destructor Dragon in their name? 7/10 Keep working on it and you'll do superb! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakenny Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 nope there just destructor dragon and yea my grammar is horrible as i just typed grammar the red line came up XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Bad OCG, unoriginal, overused pics, try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 half the pics are overused, a few of the cards need effects 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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