Womi Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Lore:Activate this card if you control a Level 7 or higher monster. Any monster summoned or flipped face-up on your Opponent's Field, with less ATK than the monster with the highest ATK you control, is destroyed. Each of your Standby Phases, pay 850 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. My question: Shall I continue this topic? Cards that show the ecological relations in the wild nature? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Nice, I love the pic. And you should continue.A 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Thank you for your opinion. I think I'll make more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Tis slightly OP. Raise the LP payment to at least 1000 as most of the cards summoned by your opponent will be monsters with 2000 or lower attack which will be quite under the attack of your Level 7. Its picture is good and you have a few OCG errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 200 is WAY too low of a cost. Make it 800 at least 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillerCubivore Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It's a good concept but at the moment it's horribly overpowered. It's practically a one card lock. The cost isn't enough and the effect is too good. Pic is good and mirrors the name well. OCG is good enough for me. Yes, I'd like to see some more cards replicating nature. 8/10, 9/10 if you make the effect more fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 thank you all, I raise the payment to 850. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Pic - 8/10 - NiceEffect - Slightly OP'd - 7/10 (With the 850 LP change, 9/10)Originality - (No Comment) - 8/10 Overall - 23/30 = 76% = 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Minor OCG errors. Post the Lore and I'll fix.^^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 thx especially to Halo Ring and I posted the Lore for you, Archelaus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 FIX: This card can only be activated while you control a face-up Level 7 or higher monster. When a monster whose ATK is lower than the ATK of a monster you control is Summoned to your opponent's field, that monster is destroyed. Each of your Standby Phases, pay 850 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. Changed the Second Effect to balance it abit. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 thank you! ^_^ Ant added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 it's = its Only error ^^. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Cool! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 I suggest changing the name of "Insect - Ant". It seems a little unexciting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 There will come more insects. And this set is absolutely realistic. So names like "Onk'ra Barthok - Ant of Destruction" are impossible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 I agree with Arch, the name is a bit boring, may need to change it.A 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormex Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Great pic for the first card.The second card is ok too, but the first is much better.I love the idea of this set and you should DEFIANTLY continue. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 thank you!Preview:Insect - Leaf-Cutter Ant comes next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Hmm, better add some more BIGGER monsters than Ants. But, I'm expecting much from this Thread. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 =O can't wait to see that guy. these are good i would say. nice job. ~8/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 They are really realistic, based on the nature. I start with the insects and get bigger and bigger. We'll have a trip into the deep ocean and into the Savanna. And antarctica, too. It will be a trip around the whole world, displaying the natural relations. The anthropogenic effects are ignored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 bumpey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 FIX for Leaf-Cutter: Your opponent cannot attack any other Insect-Type monsters you control. It's balanced. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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