GOKU7689 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 ...it fails..(harsh but true)fake type, no effect, ATK and DEF are Op'ed, etc...1/10 for trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Is this a joke? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 FAIL.FAILURE.FAILED FAILURE.EPIC FAILED FAILURE.FAILURE THAT WAS EPIC FAILED FAILURE. But.............0.00001 Boom Points for trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 In my opinion you are just spamming now. Put all your DBZ cards in one thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Please! Not just your DBZ cards, put all of your Pop Culture cards in one thread from now on, you're flooding the front page with your threads, and each only has one card in it. Apart from that: The ATK and DEF are way too high for a level 5 monster. Its effect isn't really an effect; you should either give it one or change it to a vanilla (in which case you need to make support for it). Maybe change the effect to "This monster can attack twice per turn," although that would be pretty uninteresting. The monster type should be capitalized, and "monster" is not a type; "Warrior" would fit this card much better. Don't capitalize every single letter in the card's name, and make the level in its name match its actual level, so this one would be "Kioken LV5". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
26walls Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 i am sorry but this card is not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It doesn't even have an effect. He should have either a lower ATK and DEF or a much higher level. The type is fake so change it to warrior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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