fartomatic Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 here are 4 dragons that i made. [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Oh dear god this cards SUX. They have no effects and they have to much ATK and DEF. This is the worst cards i have ever seen. -10/10By the way, the pic sux Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 If you're going to give them descriptions rather than effects, change them to normal monsters (and make support for them so they aren't boring). The descriptions are also entirely too simple. Make them more interesting so people will actually feel like they gained something out of reading them. The pics are nice, except their resolution is too low. You should find something that's either bigger (so when it's fit to the cards, it isn't so blurry) or just higher-res. Edit: Oh, and also their stats are far too high, as Tomtekorv said, and monsters really don't deserve such high levels if they don't have effects. At a certain point, you need to stop bumping up the ATK and DEF to keep it somewhat even and just give them effects to make them worth the level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OP. Normal/Effect Monster Confusion. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 The first pic is the second most overused dragon picture on YCM, but it is rapidly catching up. So change it. 1st Card: Boring name, you need to capitalise the first letter of a name, poor quality pic, fake type (itself with OCG errors), illegal ATK and DEF values, if it's an Effect Monster, give it an effect. Otherwise it is a Normal Monster. [spoiler=The Difference between Normals and Effects] Normal monsters have simply descriptive text like yours. Effect Monsters on the other hand have, well, an effect. 2nd/3rd/4th Cards: Apart from some differences (they have the same serial number(!)) these are basically the same cards. They all have poor names with bad grammar, poor pictures, the 3rd card's pic is overused, all have fake types (all with errors), and all are overpowered. One question: Do you even know what a Union Monster is? 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sohaib Ahmed Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 I am going to agree with the posts above they are clearly to OPed and need effects and you need to chane the colour to vanilla as they have not got any effects. 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 these don't fit union monsters, and all the effects are unrealistic 0.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 You need to capitalize not only the first letter of noun and other important words in the title but you must also capitalize the first letter of the part which tells you what type of card it is (Effect, Fusion...etc...). I would Change the Types to just 'Dragon' as the Attribute of the card tells us what kind of Dragon it is. And just to round it all up, you need real Types, Non-Outrageous amounts of ATK and DEF and Non-Blurry Pictures. Hope this helps you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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