ragnarok1945 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 BUMP I am so sorry that I haven't written anything these days. I have been very distracted. Such as today' date=' I realized my cellphone's been stolen D:[/quote'] *shakes head* typical. This is why some people at my school have TWO cellphones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Chapter 4 is finally up guys! Sorreh for the wait, I had to redo the chapter for an epic twist yet again! Now introducing a THIRD Faction into this: The Shinigami! EDIT: Chapter 5 added! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 BUMP I am so sorry that I haven't written anything these days. I have been very distracted. Such as today' date=' I realized my cellphone's been stolen D:[/quote'] *shakes head* typical. This is why some people at my school have TWO cellphones. One business, one personal I believe. Chapter 4 is finally up guys! Sorreh for the wait' date=' I had to redo the chapter for an [s']epic[/s] twist yet again! Now introducing a THIRD Faction into this: The Shinigami! EDIT: Chapter 5 added! ^^ Will be readin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Kay, hope you will enjoy it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Nothing interesting other than introducing the Shinigami and killing of Kakashi. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Fair enough, though you seemed to miss the narcissist joke in Chapter 4. Anyhow, I can't wait to hear Broken's and Nexev's reviews. Nexev will probably complain on all the Bleach-ism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Anyhow' date=' I can't wait to hear Broken's and Nexev's reviews. Nexev will probably complain on all the Bleach-ism.[/quote'] He's got a good reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Guess he does, with my obsession of Bleach atm =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Well I hope you realize that it is actually obvious to tell the difference between a dead and living being if your a shinigami. I think it has to do with reistu but they need that ability in order to collect pluses (who are identical to living beings in appearance). Also since the Union never attacked the shinigami (in fact the shinigami were the assailants) the union was not actually interfering with the shinigami's goals. So the whole battle is a conflict with civilian targets. You can go on trial for killing humans in the Gotei 13. It doesn't look good for Toshiro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 ...... Crap. Well *sigh* no one's perfect, and I am sorry for doing that. But hey, I'm just writing at random. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Chapter 6 up, everyone ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Pretty crappy exit for Nnoitra. :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Meh, me knows, but he had to, or Sakuyamon COULD have kicked his ass (knows that this is completely impossible since Digimon < Bleach) And I wanted to save Nnoitra's Resurrecciõn Release for later too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 No, I just mean it's crappy. Nnoitra would fight to the end. :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Yeah, sorta realized that now, crapz. Any chance on redemption from Thee Holy Bleach Lord if I make Nnoitra's next fight his LAST? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Maybe you could edit it so Nnorita was banished? That way Nnorita would have been taken out of the fight against his will and not spontaneusly leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Ah, once again, an awesome idea from Nexev himself. Thanks, will edit now ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Awesome few chapters here Abarai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Chapter 7 is up, and I hope you will be interested, Nexev ^^ Anyhow, at this point, I tell you that a Filler Arc will be introduced, that will tell the story of Renamon training with Yoruichi in the art of using Shunko, and Rika discovering the history behind the staff she found. And ty CS for the comment ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 That's not Yoruichi. That is obviously an imposter. nourcharactars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Seems as I have to painfully repeat myself; I do not have time to research sometimes, and this Chapter was sort of stressed, but in the next one, expect her to be IC. And have you never heard that you should be nice to little girls? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 She's dreadfully out of character. DREADFULLY. That enough should be it. :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Okay, I will improve, I promise. Now, for Nnoitra to sing a little song! [spoiler=Slaughter Your World]Nnoitra Jiruga was standing on a stage in the Regulant Base, with all the other Arrancar sitting in the crowd. A light was shining at him, and he began singing as the background changed from white to a small village. "Excitement abounds, I almost can't wait. Relax, I don't want your baby, I already ate. Though I do tend to generally kill. Kill things that don't fight back, haha! I see this village, what does it hold? What should I butcher them with? Fire or cold? Running from me I'm sure you'd think; "He's a pathological, bloodthirsty, homicidal maniac!" I kill kittens, and puppies and bunnies. I maim toddlers and teens and then more! You see a wife, I see a widow. But what then, can't you see, I kill for?" in the last sentence, women and children crying were heard, and the background changed to the same village, but burning. "I want to incinerate and decapitate. I want to melt, want to melt some faces. Watching the peasants... oh what do they call it? Ah, grieve! I suppose that being undead there's not much to life. A soul is needed for loving and feeling. How does this all not make me... ah whats that word again? Heave! You've nowhere to hide, nowhere to run! Your village will burn like the heart of the sun! With infinite glee, its going to be me, that slaughters the world." once again, the background changed to a decaying village, filled with rottening corpses and dying persons. "How could I glare, into these eyes and then not stab them? How could I stare at their loss and then not laugh? I'd cut him in half, then I'd graft his head back onto his shoulders. Or after I'd lop it, I'd make a puppet, on top of a staff. I am a lord that is sometimes bored. Have some urges and need to fulfill them. After my mayhem I simply don't... whats the word? Care!" now, the background changed one last time, to the Earth being in flames and decaying slowly. "The stench in the air, the smell of the gore! The carnage far greater than any war!" The last scene was nothing but a blank background. "My legacy... *sigh*... death becomes... me... I'll slaughter the... world......"[/spoiler] Slaughter Your World, by LFG: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1jcm4AfpMc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Thats funny Abarai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Thank you Matt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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