cHECK OUT MY NEW KINGDOM HEARTS CARDS.

[26walls]

The second one in the vote spot is supposed to say good for a begginer.

[Jazin Kay]

REALLY bad terminology.

 

I'm not even gonna start on the images.

[Starly_64]

Anti-Form:

"Key-wielder Sora" + 1 "Heartless" monster

 

Calling all Heartless:

Activate this card if there are no Zombie-Type monsters you control. Special Summon 1 "Heartless" monster from your Graveyard and equip it to this card. If this card is destroyed, destroy the equipped monster.

 

Heartless Symbol:

Increase your Life points by 200 for every "Heartless" monster you control.

 

Heartless LV 2:

If this is card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Heartless" monster from your Deck. The Summoned monster cannot attack during your next Battle Phase.

 

Key-wielder Sora:

During your turn, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Spell or Trap Cards.

 

Organization- Roxas:

Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500 points if "Key-wielder Sora" is on the field.

 

Save The King:

This card can only be equipped to "Goofy". Increase the equipped monster's DEF by 800 points.

 

Key-wielder Riku:

This card gains 100 ATK for every DARK monster on the field.

 

As well as these fixes, the effects are not original (most of them consist of increasing ATK or DEF points), and you forgot using capitalization in the effects and names. Don't copy my fixed effects, but at least use original effects for a few of the characters.

Images are bad

Anti Form cannot have two main Types

 

Overall, 2.5/10. These need serious fixes.

[Hotsasuma]

Pictures are pretty bland with no back round to them.Need to Spell check all your cards and Capitalize alot of words.A lot of OCG errors like don't use the word get use gain.The effects are unoriginal and most of them just gain ATK and DEF.So, 2/10 needs alot of improvement to do.