Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 I just finished a 17 card set of my first post. I created monsters called Bezsmi Bug monsters. As well as; a few bonus cards I made and 2 Syncro monsters too! IF you would please tell me about any mistakes I have made and I'll try to fix them soon. Well, here there they are: When this card is in face-up attack position and there are no spell or trap cards on your side of the field, you can special summon one LV 3 or lower tuner monster from your hand or graveyard. If a spell or trap card is placed on your side of the field this turn, that monster is destroyed and your opponent gains 800 LP. This card cannot be used for a syncro material monster unless you pay 800 LP. When this card is special summoned you gain 1100 LP. Also, If this card is destroyed while in attack position, you can activate effects according to the amount of damage taken:- 1000+ : Special summon this card during your opponents next standby phase.- 2000+ : Your opponent takes 1600 damage during their end phase.- 3000+ : Your opponent sends all but one card from their hand to the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OCG HORRORSHORRIBLE IMAGESHORRIBLE/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OCG HORRORSHORRIBLE IMAGESHORRIBLE/10 ALL I had was google (WOW) does anyone know where I can find better pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitial Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 I just use Google :) I like these cards. But that isn't saying much since people aren't big fans of my cards either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Yes...And I have other advice. 1)Photobucket and Showcase images2)Dont rate your own threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Bad pics and horrible OCG 2/10 Deviant art is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Yes...And I have other advice. 1)Photobucket and Showcase images2)Dont rate your own threads. I DIDNT even know I could rate my own thingsI was experimenting and it happened (can I remove It?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 No. I removed a few but its impossible to remove all I think. Anyways just please dont do that for future threads. If people truely enjoy your cards they will say so. The Thread Rating system is rarely used since peoples enthusiasm is indicated by their rates in their posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Even though none of you like the pics, Why dont YOU take a LOOK at the EFFECTS!!!!!!!!! I Spent a lot of time on that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Even though none of you like the pics' date=' Why dont YOU take a LOOK at the EFFECTS!!!!!!!!! I Spent a lot of time on that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/quote'] go to the OCG Grammar Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 As for the effects....There are to many cards here for me to take the time to read the effects although from some I can tell you that you OCG (Official Card Grammar) is quite terrible and some are OP (Overpowering) and some are UP (Underpowered) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 As for the effects....There are to many cards here for me to take the time to read the effects although from some I can tell you that you OCG (Official Card Grammar) is quite terrible and some are OP (Overpowering) and some are UP (Underpowered) Could you give me an example of which cards are overpowered and which are underpowered' date=' also tell me why? P.S. I thought my grammar was good, I'll see what the OCG is about.[hr']Where is the OCG grammar thread ?????????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 OCG is what REAL cards effects sentence structure is such as capitalizing the proper words and leaving out certain words. As for OP and UP cards. Your first card. Its effect is to strong for a low level card. The LP increase is vastly OP for such a low level card. That pikachu card. Its attack is to high for a normal monster. And a few others As for the UP: Fairy Traitor. Its effect only boosts its DEfense and since it cant be used for LIGHT synchros it greatly reduces the amount of synchros it can be used for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 I understand now, srry I didnt mean to post pikachu.Also, I must of forgotten to put a LV on my first card, and it put the default. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 It's ok. BTW: Sorry for sounding so rude and blunt. I'm feeling a little off today so Im just tetchy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Ill will go over my cards and repost them, hopefully ill do better.Im not used to the new wording of the cards yet. I found the guide too. It should help a lot. Untill later I guess! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Its fine. A little suggestion. If you want when you post your cards, I can fix the OCG for you but I'll only do so if you post just 2 or 3 of the cards at a time AND post their effects beneath each card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Its fine. A little suggestion. If you want when you post your cards' date=' I can fix the OCG for you but I'll only do so if you post just 2 or 3 of the cards at a time AND post their effects beneath each card.[/quote'] well i only posted effects for the 2 that were hard to read I know why you want them posted there. I get to u when i need help. Thanx! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Mhmm. I just like having the effect posted so that i just have to copy paste modify instead of retyping the WHOLE thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Mhmm. I just like having the effect posted so that i just have to copy paste modify instead of retyping the WHOLE thing. I KNO! Im not dumb.srry im being rude now, i insinuated that statement above. "I know why you want them there"( maybe this was unclear Srry! :)Ps: Im typing slow, something is wrong w/ computer. I'm using my wii now!(yay!-sarcastically) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Oh lol sorry I thought you were saying that to something else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 I THINK EVERYONE WHO SEES THIS SHOULD KNOW: THE PICS ARE NOT PERMANENT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Try using Deviant Art. Although its hard to find images that fit some card ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Try using Deviant Art. Although its hard to find images that fit some card ideas What is deviant art???! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 www.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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