Don Shadow Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 FRAXY WARS Episode I Part I Our story begins when negotiations are taken into action. The remote planet of Goron will be holding the negotiations. the holding was refused by the Solar Council. so the negotiations will be held at a remote (soon to be enemy) base at the outer rim of backeron, to try to keep a war from starting. Don: we're gonna need a fighter crew, maybe bring a couple tankers and spinners. general 1: got it. you heard em'! let's move it! later beside the base... Galleron: this is going to be too easy. *BOOM!* fighter 1: ahh! i'm hit!fighter 2: hold it together man!fighter 3: i'll take care of em! *BOOM!* fighter 3: ah s- *kaboom!blammity!blammity!boom!boom!bang!* tanker 1: i'm on him! *kerboom!* tanker 1:looks like i'm goin' down boys! *kerblam!* spinner 1: looks like i'm taking care of him *kerboom! blammity, boom, bam, bomb!* general 1: there went ultimatia. shadow! blackwing!all ships were destroyed, even ultimatia! don: we'll take care of him! 5 minutes later... don: he ran off. enemy general:he was just trying to prevent any harm to us!get those pilots! don:let's get outta here! to be edited in later times. feel free to comment and suggest ideas for episode 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 *Sighs* Noob. -This is a FAN FIC.-If it is an RP, it's missing tons of things.-If it is a Fan Fic, it's missing tons of things.-Horrible grammar.-Not even written like a story.-No spoilers or anything. Much more that I don't feel like explaining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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