Pichu Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Plz commit! hey wat isn't any one commiting :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 You spelt comment wrong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 don't give a freak reallywat do u think of my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Many errors. But I will not point them out; I'll let some other brainiac do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 as much as i wanna tell you that you just had an epic fail, i wont. just that you should know that there are a number of things wrong here.1 - pics2 - ocg3 - vanillas w/o support4 - no real text on vanillas5 - fake types6 - OP'ed cards7 - no real thought into creating this set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 How YCM makes spell and trap cards. 1: Find image of something.2: Name the card exactly what the image is.3: Make up some irrelevant effect.4: ???5: PROFIT! No thought at all went into these. Makes no sense at all. None. Walking Home is a field trap. And says "field becomes a city street". What the hell, seriously. 0/10 Also, OP can't spell worth crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 u no wat thats just meanplease don't comment mean stuff(O~O) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 They are not being mean, dude. They're merely pointing out what you could improve with your card making. Don't flame those that tries to help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakao Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 err... I really got nothing to say dude... your cards have irrelevent effects, and whats with the fake types? I get that it's pop culture cards and stuff but seriously? You need to be more specific when you have a field spell card because "Field become a city street." has no effect on your cards whatsoever. No offence or anything, just trying to point out some errors, but you should take a look at some official Yu-Gi-Oh cards BEFORE you make your own so you get a feel for the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 I'm gonna say the exact same thing I posted in your last Sonic thread that you ignored: 1. Several images need backgrounds, and try not to include words in them2. Do not make a majority of Normal Monsters, because they are useless without Support Cards or effects3. The stats for NiGHTS (not even a Sonic character), Amy the Werehog and Werepuppies are overpowered for their Level (especially the last one).4. Do not make fake Types e.g. Baby, Dreamer, Babies.5. Ritual Spell Cards do not work that way. They are used to Tribute certain monsters for their Levels to Summon Ritual Monsters. BTW, the effects for the Spell Cards are a bit too generic.6. When quoting a card name, put quotation marks e.g. "Sonic".7. Where is Sonic? 3/10. These cards need serious improvements. If you need advice, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 this is a really sonic fan fiction 7.5/10 fix the cards like they say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 yea sorry dude, but these arent that good. my recommendation: go thru legitimate yugioh cards and get a good idea on what OCG is (official card grammar) and then re-edit these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Thanks everyone I will fix these!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axira10 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 only good thing i see is a couple good pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ito54321 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 could use some work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Bad OCG. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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