yugiohmakermasta Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 while this card remains face up on your side of the field, you can tribute this card to spical summon one shining star lvl 5, from your hand or deck. Send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK equal to or less than the ATK of the sent monster. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as the result of battle, send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Shining Star lvl 7" from your hand or Deck. This card cannot be Normal Summoned, or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Shining Star lvl 5". By sending 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK equal to or less than the ATK of the sent monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Shining star LV7" on your side of the field. While this card is face up on your side of the field all light monster gain 1000 ATK and Def 1 Shining star lvl7 + 1 shining star lvl10 All light monster on your side of the field gain 1000 ATK and lose 500 DEF. Sorry the card sould say 1000 not 100 Select 1 Monster Card from either you or your opponents Graveyard. special summon it on your side of the field regardless of its effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentX Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Major OCG Problems. Shining stars should go in any other cards if you keep the fake type, change the type.[spoiler=OCG Corrections][spoiler=Shining Star Lvl 3]You may tribute this card to Special Summon one "Shining Star Lvl 5" from your hand or deck. [spoiler=Shining Star Lvl 5]Once per turn, you can discard one Monster Card from your hand to your graveyard to send to the graveyard one monster with an ATK equal or less than the ATK of the card discarded. During the End Phase of a turn in which this card sends another monster to the graveyard as a result of battle, you may tribute this card to Special Summon one "Shining Star Lvl 7" from your hand or deck. [spoiler=Shining Star Lvl 7]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Shining Star Lvl 5". Once per turn, you can discard one Monster Card from your hand to the graveyard to send all monsters on your opponents side of the field with an ATK equal or less than the ATK of the card discarded. [spoiler=Shining Star Lvl 10]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing one "Shining Star Lvl 7" on your side of the field. As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT attribute monsters you control by 1000. [spoiler=Ultimate Shining Star]"Shining Star Lvl 7" + "Shining Star Lvl 10"As long as this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all LIGHT attribute monsters on your side of the field by 100 and decrease their DEF by 500. Good effort. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 almost all the pics are unimpressive besides Divine is not a type, it's an attribute, which you shouldn't do anyway 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 OCG is off. Pics aren't that good. 3.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted October 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Fixed the cards and sorry their called shining star I could not find any good star pictures. comment on my ultimate rebirth spell card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 It still has errors. Fixes:1- "You can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shining Star LV5" from your hand or Deck."2-"Once per turn, you can discard 1 Monster Card to destroy 1 monster on the field whose ATK is equal to or lower than the discarded monster. During the End Phase of a turn this card destroyed a monster by battle, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Shining Star LV7" from your hand or Deck."3-"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Shining Star LV 5". By sending 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent controls with an ATK equal to or less than the ATK of the sent monster."4-"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Shining star LV7" you control. While this card is face up on the field, all LIGHT monsters gain 1000 ATK and DEF."5-"While this card is face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters gain 1000 ATK and lose 500 DEF."6-"Special Summon 1 monster in either players Graveyard." The above is the proper fixes.The last card is OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentX Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Hey! You used my OCG! Thanks! Cool cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Reborn~ Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 it needs work. seriously. 561 Boom Pts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Magic card is, um Monster Reborn? Also the shining stars a bit too close to the Armed Dragon's effect, I think. The ATK Gains are too much, bring it down or change to something else... 4/10 Could be better and more original, huh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 The ultimate rebirth is not monster reborn it can summon monster who has an eff that says that it cannot be summoned by special summoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Errr. These cards need serious ocg workLike The pics anyway3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohmakermasta Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 WOW I'll say this I know the picture look ugly but that was all i could find Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 you need to work in your OCG. the ide is great, but you need repair the cards. 5/10(for now) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 OCG errors and unimpressive pics and almost every card has too simple effects 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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