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Welp reviewed my first 5 cards and made improvements...


Jacksknight1

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your OCG needs some work checkl out the OCG pill on my signature its a good idea you just need to work on them

Overall i give it a 7/10 - for effort

 

ps. you know how it says "The magician's fury" under your name how did you do that ive been trying to figure it out for days lol

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your OCG needs some work checkl out the OCG pill on my signature its a good idea you just need to work on them

Overall i give it a 7/10 - for effort

 

ps. you know how it says "The magician's fury" under your name how did you do that ive been trying to figure it out for days lol

 

you have to click on user cp next to the logout button and go to edit profile then look for were you type in want you want.

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OCG = Official Card Grammar, AKA the 'lore' or just the card's description.

 

First card:

spellcaster type monster -> Spellcaster-Type Monster

 

Second card:

it's -> its

 

Third card:

special summoned -> Special Summoned.

spellcaster type monsters -> Spellcaster-Type Monsters.

trap cards -> Trap Cards

 

Fourth card:

spell card -> Spell Card

spellcaster type monster -> Spellcaster-Type Monster

graveyard -> Graveyard

 

Fifth card:

face up -> face-up

trap cards -> Trap Cards

battle phase -> Battle Phase.

 

;)

 

The pics and the effects are nice.

7/10

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NOOOOOOO!! Someone used that ninja pic before me (someone else probly used it anyway). But, I'm here to review, so...all the pics are cool (*sob* ninja pic *sob*) and the effects are all balanced, except the Stave, you should get rid of the part where the monster can't attack (just a suggestion). Everyone talked about OCG already, so...yeah. Pretty good, I'll say...8.8/10 (*sob* ninja pic *sob*) lol ^_^

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