Hell-Razor Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 These are my 1st 3 cards Please rate, and comment e.t.c thanks [align=center]Anubis - Lord of the DeadEffect - This card cannot be Special Summoned.When this card is Summoned, remove from play all cards in your opponents Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field any of your opponents cards that would be sent to the Graveyard are removed from play instead. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to remove from play 1 card of the same type your opponent controls. As long as this card remains face-up on the field you cannot control another monster.[/align] [align=center]Anubis - Lord of the LivingEffect - This card cannot be Special Summoned.When this card is Summoned, remove from play all cards that your opponent controls. As long as this card remains face-up on the field your opponent can only control 1 monster at a time.Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field you cannot control another monster.[/align] [align=center]Anubis - Ultimate RulerEffect - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "Anubis - Lord of the Dead" and 1 "Anubis - Lord of the Living" from your hand, field or Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is Summoned your opponent must remove from play all cards from their hand, field and Graveyard and Draw 3 cards. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, at your opponents End Phase they can have only 1 card in their hand, 1 card on the field and 1 card in the Graveyard, any other cards are removed from play.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 OCG seems fine. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 For the last effect in the first card, add "In addition, as long as this card... -etc, etc-, makes it flow better. Also Anubis - Ultimate Ruler is too good. It is extremely easy to Summon and it's effect and attack points are crazy. But I like the effects overall, and the pictures are pretty awesome. So 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 for early cards the OCG is very good, as are the pics 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horologia Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Nice pics, but "Anubis the Ultimate Ruler" is to strong. 3500 Points of direct damage, and only 1 card in your hand to stop him...No Chance... FIXED: I thougth you can attack directly with this card, sorry for reading mistake =(but destroying every card in somones hands is really weird... (Even with one card left nearly impossible to stop this creature...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Not bad OCG and pictures fro first cards dude. ;) Rate - 8.1/10 Keep it up. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Chief13 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 "Anubis-Ultimate Ruler" is too strong. maybe you have to pay 1000-2000 lifepoints to attackgood OCG 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otto194 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Ok what do you guys mean the ultimate ruler is too OP'd i think its fine its gonna be really hard to summon and it cannot attack directly so i think its good Great job for your first time dude 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thanks a lot everyone for your comments Please if any1 has any tips on my ocg as in where im wrong e.t.c i would greatly appreciate that thanks And Ultimate Ruler is a strong card but cannot attack directly, and its effect/it can be stopped by Spell & Trap cards i may change it so its slightly harder to summon, but overall i am happy with the reviews for my first cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperSusanoo Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 God these cards are awsome11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thanks a lot im glad you like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 for a first couple of cards these are very very good 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Pretty Good, Keep It Up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thanks for your comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 very awesome, i like the pics...better than mah furzt cards...10/10 (indeed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Bumping this to see if can get any new info or anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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