Ririkun Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 My new ritual cards, I made sure the Ocg was correct, hopefully no mistakes?I think the effect is balanced enough, rate and fix :) EDIT: I know the pictures are blurry and the first picture is overused, I haven't seen many picturesin this site so I'm not sure what is used or not, It just seemed to be an interesting thing to createwhen I saw this picture pop up. Also, comments on the effects are welcome too. Yuri, Swordmaster of Storm8 Star [WIND]Warrior/Ritual/EffectAtk 2800 Def 2400This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Stormblade's call". When this card is Ritual Summoned, you can destroy up to two cards on the field. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 level 6 or lower WIND monster from your deck. Spell Card [Ritual]This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Yuri, Swordmaster of Storm" from your hand or deck. You must also offer Tribute Monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon. You can remove from play this card from your graveyard to prevent 1 face-up Ritual Monster you control from being targeted by the effects of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Cards this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hell-Razor Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 You have some ocg errors, capitalization mainly and a few misplaced words, bad pics if im being honest you can do better 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Pic is bad. Minor OCG errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 You have some ocg errors' date=' capitalization mainly and a few misplaced words, bad pics if im being honest you can do better 4/10[/quote'] Really? So what do you think I should improve on. and can you note the errors?Pic is bad. Minor OCG errors. 7/10 is it because the pic is overused or its bad quality? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 You have some ocg errors' date=' capitalization mainly and a few misplaced words, bad pics if im being honest you can do better 4/10[/quote'] Really? So what do you think I should improve on. and can you note the errors?Pic is bad. Minor OCG errors. 7/10 is it because the pic is overused or its bad quality? A little of both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 You have some ocg errors' date=' capitalization mainly and a few misplaced words, bad pics if im being honest you can do better 4/10[/quote'] Really? So what do you think I should improve on. and can you note the errors?Pic is bad. Minor OCG errors. 7/10 is it because the pic is overused or its bad quality? A little of both. Yeah, i was trying to look for a picture similar to it but I couldn't find one, and next time I'll have a better quality one. Mind pointing out any OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 they are op'dplus the pics are heaps blurry7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Hmm, you should just fix them using this: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ririkun Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 they are op'dplus the pics are heaps blurry7/10 op'd? what does that mean?and yeah I get the picture issue, I'll put moreeffort into it next time, but I'd like someone to comment on the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 OP'ed = Over Powered otherwise known as Broken Cards with Powerful unbalanced effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 both pics are blurry, 1st one is overused and oped (needs drawbacks) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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