Horologia Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Hi there! This is my verry first creation. (A great tool, your card creator) Effect: If this card is normal summoned, choose a "Malevolent Nuzzler" in your deck and place it on the top of your deck. If this card is eqquiped with "Malevolent Nuzzler", onceper turn you can choose a monster on the opponents side of the field and take control over this monster until your next Standby-Phase Hope you all know, what "Malevolent Nuzzler" is. I think this card is balanced,because 1. You need 2 Tribute Monster for it. 1. It would be hard to protect the succubus before she is eqquiped with "Malevolent Nuzzler". So the opponent has at least 1 turn to defeat her. What do you think about it?Your: Horo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Well, it doesn't require 2 tributes since you made it a 1 star. Couple grammar (ocg) errors, such as capitalization, but not bad. ^_^ Welcome to YCM by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horologia Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Whoops '^^ (Have forgotten the Level Part in the editor) Well FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 OCG FIX: When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 "Malevolent Nuzzler" in your Deck andplace it on the top of your Deck. While this card is equipped with "Malevolent Nuzzler", onceper turn, you can take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until your next Standby Phase. Pretty OP'ed considering the last effect. 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 It's really not OP'ed, because: 1. To get Nuzzler to the top of your Deck, you'd have to tribute summon. 2. You'd (usually) have at least 1 turn to take her out. 3. Mystical Space Typhoon, anyone? She's just a 1900 without it. It's great. I'd build an Equip Deck around it. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 For a first attempted you did very good very balanced and nice pic you must be a dullest like the strategies welcome to YCM and hope to see more from you. 9/10 Effect: If this card is Normal Summoned you can select 1 "Malevolent Nuzzler" from your deck andplace it on the top of your deck. If this card is eqquiped with "Malevolent Nuzzler", onceper turn you can select 1 monster your opponent controles, take control of the selected monster until your next Standby-Phase. I think lol Oh and a draw card would make for a nice combo with this then you do not need to wait a turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Pretty Awesome 9/10. You'll be a good card maker ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 awesome pic, good effect, balanced, etc. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Really good for a first timer! Welcome to the forum, I think we'll see some great things from you in the future :) I think the OCG-fix should be as follows (not 100% sure though):When this card is Normal Summoned, select 1 "malevolent Nuzzler" in your Deck and place it on the top of your Deck. Once per turn, if this card is equipped with "Malevolent Nuzzler", select one opponing monster and take control of it until your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 "If this card is Normal Summoned, choose a "Malevolent Nuzzler" in your Deck and place it on the top of your Deck. Once per turn, if this card is equipped with "Malevolent Nuzzler", you can take control of a monster on your opponent's side of the field until your next Standby Phase" is the correct OCG. I'm 99.8% sure. There's some capitalization errors I just noticed and 1 small OCG error, but ur new, as stated in above posts, so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Good for your first card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meatsheild41 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Okay I'll start with the pic. How do I say this...uh...wow, hot. The effect I have to say is nicely balanced, especially since it's only 1900 ATK and a level 7. I'm definitly giving it a 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horologia Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Well... thank all of you verry much ^^ I dont have expected this much of praise... (Getting red like a tomatoe) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 just put a drawback to go with the last effect and it should be good to go 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 This is a very accurate and well balanced card. Very nice for your first. 10/10 :D ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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