my first zombies

[green devil]

i made a couple of zombie cards theyr'e not my first cards but i'm still quite new here so i'd appreciate any ways to improve

 

 

Each turn before the battle phase you have to show your hand to your opponent then you discard every non-zombie monster in your hand to the graveyard then this card loses 200 ATK for each monster you sent to the graveyard using this effect then you can discard any amount of zombies monsters from your hand it then gains 200 ATK for each zombie monster in you discarded

 

 

 

you can normal summon this card if it's in your grave

[Horologia]

Some OCG mistakes:

 

1. Card

"In your Main-Phase, you have to show your opponent your hand. Discare every non-Zombie type monster to the Graveyard. Decrease the ATK of this card by 200 for each monster you sent to the graveyard and Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every Zombie Type Monster in your hand."

 

Or something like this ^^

 

Fazit:

 

Cool Pic, where do you get it?

 

You know, if you would have this card, you only would have zombie types in your deck, so it would be to powerfull...

 

2. Card

"During your Main-Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, you can normal summon it from your graveyard"

 

Also cool Pic! You really have to tell me where you get them from XD

 

Fazit: Too powerfull too. Decrease the ATK of it, and all will be fine =)

[Blazer]

Edit:

Lorkad The Undead Knight:x

Edit.

Zombie.:x

1/10

[green devil]

cool Pic' date=' where do you get it?

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i got the pics from google

and i've made the undead lord less power full

[ragnarok1945]

2nd one is way too bland of an effect, give it another

 

1st one has OCG errors, and also appears slightly UPed

 

7/10