Sweet Lightning Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 First card in a while, and I'm not sure how good of a job I did on it. This card is meant for a quick burn or ATK/DEF loss. Heck, it might be OP'd. Tell me what you think and I hope you liek mah card. :) Effect: When this card is Summoned, place 2 "Revenge Counters" on it. If this card is attacked, place 1 "Revenge Counter" on it. When this card is destroyed by battle, select and activate 1 of the following effects:● Select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.The selected card loses ATK and DEF equal to the number of "Revenge Counters" on this card x200. This effect lasts until the selected card is destroyed or removed from the field.● Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Revenge Counters" on this card x300.● Special Summon 1 "Vengeful Shinobi" from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 The effect looks decent, and the overall card is pretty balanced. The only thing that comes to mind is that the width of the picture looks a little bit stretched. Otherwise, excellent work. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 OCG seems fine. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 OCG is very good, I'm not sure if it's perfect but it's good, the pic is cool, the effects looks good, and balanced9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 OCG is fine the way it is, just add a max counter limit to it and everything's good to go 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 9/10 but creeepy, how will i ever sleep tonight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thanks for your rates guys! :) @Ragnarok: Good idea. :) @Pr!Nc3: Just think of a happy place. Like a meadow with candy-crusted mountains. Or a pizzeria. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Creepy Pic but everything else is in tip top shape 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thanks Dragoncreator! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Bump. One more time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Didnt see any OCG errors and the effect is pretty balanced out. The only thing about it, is that the pic is a bit bland because there is no colour. Overall, a decent attempt, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 This is pretty good, but I think the damage you take from this card being destroyed by battle would be greater than the damage to your opponent. It's nice and balanced, OCG, well, I have no clue what the correct OCG is, so, yeah. And sweet pic! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 This is pretty good' date=' but I think the damage you take from this card being destroyed by battle would be greater than the damage to your opponent.[/quote'] Well, Spenstar, that is true, but you could activate another one of this monster's effects, such as making your opponent's monster lose valuable ATK and DEF. And, on the Life Points, you could combine this card with other cards (ex. "Heart of Clear Water") to get more "Revenge Counters" on it, increasing the damage dealt to your opponent. But you made a good point. Thanks for your feedback and rate. :) Same to you, Kotaro. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spenstar Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tacobill123 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Awesome effect. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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