Des HERO Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 my last fanfic didn't go well so ive made this one.we need characters and if you make a character you will get 1-3 reps.[spoiler=plot]a new duel academy has been made in dueling capital domino city.Duelists all over domino city have been excited to go to the newest academy with the newest technology.A new duelist named Rex Raber comes to this duel academy 2 years after it was made.To do that he needs to pass the entrence exam.Will he get to the top and duel the best duelists in the academy also will he get the chance to graduate and become a pro.He meets new friends,new rivals and some enemies. [spoiler=chat]im planning a chat. [spoiler=make a character]heres the apps for it pm it to me name:age:(needs to be age 15-19 for students and 25-45 for teacher)personality:apperance:dorm:deck:signature card:bio:story part:(what are they in the story) [spoiler=characters][spoiler=main chracters] name:rexage:15personality:nicem,calm and friendlyappearence:wears a slifer coat,black trousers,slifer hatdorm:slifer reddeck:synchro decksignature card:junk warrior(at start)bio:when he was 8 he got his first pack what he got goyo gaurdian and other cards with it but a theif named "THE DEMON" stole it.He lives in the ilse of man until he moved to irland when he was 10. 3 years later he saw on tv domino academy being made and he asked his parents if he could go there they said no.He finaly got his starter deck when he was 14 and traveled to domino academy then.story part:he came to domino academy for fun. name:destructage:17personaly:hates the slifers and is friends with all the oblisks and the most powerful ra.appearence:wears an black coat(insted of blue) and blue trousers.dorm:oblisk bluedeck:destiny heros/elemental heroessignature card:destiny hero dreadmaster(at start)bio:the best of the best at domino duel academy he has defeated thousands of foes and is rumored to have needed 3 powerful cards.story part:soon challenges rex name: Samuel Fox(made by rook bishop)age: 20personality: Ruthless, Smart, Feared and Calmapperance: dorm: Radeck: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-95514.html & http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-154552.htmlsignature card: ???bio: Basically hate everyone who get in his way. Little is known about his history name:morph(made by reeves246)age:16personalty:known alot in academyappearence:yellow t-shirt with black trousersdorm:radeck:morphitonicsignature card: ???bio:hes an 2nd year student who can quickly dominate a duel also is known for his stratagies. He could beat some of the oblisks. name:Rowen(made my itchy)age:15personality:cool,thoughtful,friendly,leaderfulappearance:raper hat,black hair blue jacket,blue jeans and a black t-shirtdorm:slifer reddeck:Thunder monsterssignature card:Lightning torturerbio:Rowen is one of the best duelists in the world and he is the European national champion.Enters the academy to beat every high level student so they move slifer red to the top.story part:He beats Rex and gives him a master lesson about playing.Dies after two years giving his soul to reseal the unleashed oricalcus that took control over Samuel Fox. name:nerdage:15personalty:quite boring to talk toappearence:all his clothes are reddorm:slifer reddeck:roidssignature card:steamgyroidbio: a total mystery name:desage:16personalty:likes to run and likes adventuresappearence:all his clothes are reddorm:slifer reddeck:ojamassignature card:ojama kingbio: a total mystery name:proffesor doomage:30personalty:strickappearence:black and blue coatdorm:oblisk(teacher)deck:ancient gear'ssignature card: ???bio:he hates slifers what he hates more is getting beat by one. name:proffesor steinsteinage:28personalty:boring because he is too smartappearence:yellow and black coatdorm:ra yellow(teacher)deck:science(main one)signature card:water dragonbio:not known much name:proffesor goodwinage:26personalty:hes respecked because hes niceappearence:red and black coat,red hair and wears glassesdorm:slifer red(teacher)deck:he likes yugisignature card:gaia the dragon championbio:hes the most liked teacher since hes nice and theirs a lot of slifers name: Ryan Darshan(made by epic dino)age: 17personality: An overall friendly guy, a bit stuck up but still a nice guy to have around, he's a great athlete but doesn't take a lot of pride in it, he'd rather be the best in the brains department than sports, although he tries, he not very smart, not too talkative when he's not supposed to be until challenged. He may not be smart but he's a great strategizer. He's not great at bouncing back though.apperance: dorm: Radeck: Modded Zombie Burnsignature card: Everliving Underworld Cannonbio: Growing up in a middle class family, he was ordinary. His parents had fights but never split up. He was good at dueling though, and many thought they could beat him when he introduced himself to the dueling community, but he beat many of them. However, he was not one to never lose. name:samonage:30 personalty:an total pycho and has powers to see the future to make friends and use them to do his dirty work.appearence:not known yetdorm: nonedeck: ???signature card: ???bio: an mystery but all we know is hes collecting energy from the students to make world domonation. [spoiler=minor characters] name:proteckage:25personalty:hated most of the time because hes a little easy and trickyappearence:duel coat with an mad black eye and an eye patchdorm:nonedeck:ultimate defencesignature card:big sheild gaurdnabio:he is only seen in the entrence exam when dueling people and is an tough opponant for most of the slifers but easy for the rest. name:the demonage:23personalty:evil and ruflessappearence: black clouthes with an shady lookdorm:nonedeck: total mixupsignature card: goyo guardianbio:an evil theif possested by samon. [spoiler=chapter 1 finaly domino academy]________________at the domino academy duel arena_______________ "well well well someone later"said the person."im here for the entrence exam"said rex."fine by the way my name is professor doom just call me doom"said doom."who do I duel?"questioned rex."urgghh that guy"replied doom as he pointed at a person"hmm names proteck"said proteck."what?"questioned rex."you shouldn't know my name"explained proteck."LETS DUEL!!!"they shouted. rex vs proteck_______ As they pulled their disks some people from the seats wearing red,yellow and blue coats were sitting also their were others with original clouthes. "hmm I show you who will win I draw"said proteck.Proteck summons a monster face down def mode and sets a card. "hmm intresting"said a person from the ra yellows."yes morph"replied the other."ok then sameul"said morph. "my move"said rex.Rex activates double summoning speed warrior(atk doubled to 1800) and quilbolt hedgehog(atk 800).Speed warrior attacks the monster but it turns out to be bid shield gaurdna(def 2600)(rex 3200)."oh I forgotten the guardna switches to atk opps"said proteck.So quilbolt hedgehog attacks the guardna but proteck activates his face down block attack switching big sheild guardna to def mode(def 2600)(rex 1400) big shield guardna(atk 100) Proteck switches the guardna to def mode then summons aqua mador(atk 1200)and it attacks quilbolt hedgehog(rex 1000). "my guess he will be a slifer"said sameul."your possible correct"replied morph."ive got to win"said rex as he hit the ground."no card in your deck can beat my stratagy HA HA"laughed proteck. ("ok heart of the cards")thought rex as he drew."bingo"Rex summons junk synchron(atk 1300) his effect specil summons quilbolt hedgehog(atk 800)."hmmm those wimps can't beat me"boasted proteck."negitive"laughed rex.Rex tributes quilbolt hedgehog(lv 2) and junk synchron(lv 3) to synchro summon junk warrior(lv 5 atk 2300)"guess what junk warriors effect makes its attack 3200 so junk warrior send aqua mador to the scrap hep"commanded rex.(protect 2000) "gosh half his life points down the toilet"said samuel."I like him"said morph as samuel stared at him."odd"said proteck. Proteck draws then ends his turn."nothing to do"laughed rex."JUST YOU WAIT NOOB!!!"shouted proteck. Rex orders junk warriolr to demolish big shield gaurdna then speed warrior attacks proteck(proteck 1100).Then Rex activates block attack switching speed warrior to def mode(def 400)"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"shouted proteck as the attack landed proteck's face looked so red it could explode as he drew.Proteck summons giant soldier of stone(atk 1300) then activates shield and sword(junk warrior atk 1300/giant soldier of stone atk 2000)as giant soldier of stone attacks junk warrior rex just got comfused(rex 300). "IM MAD AT THAT JUNK WARRIOR"shouted proteck."ok"said rex. Shield and sword is destroyed.Rex switchs speed warrior to atk mode(atk 900) then summons magna draco(atk 1400)then magna draco attacks the giant soldier of stone(proteck 1000) then speed warrior attacks proteck(proteck 100)."I surrender fine you win"said proteck. REX WINS "cutos to you"shouted doom(sarcasm)."I won?"questioned rex."yes you will be an slifer red"said doom as he left."new people go to your home for tommor"said the chancellor. THE END OF CHAPTER 1 [spoiler=chapter 2 ultimate dread]____________classroom___________________ "attension all students the chancellor is not here today so he asked me to give you your dorms"shouted doom."hey you"wispered one of the students."huh"replied rex."lets be friends im nerdus but call me nerd"said nerd."im Rex why are you called nerdus nerd"questioned rex."nevermind"explained nerd."ok nerd your slifer and des is one too"said doom. Behind Nerd was a slifer called Des who knows why hes called that. "oh rex I forgot you your um slifer"explained doom."doh"muttered rex."why are you saying DOH"shouted doom."ive got a question"asked rex."IF ITS WHATS MY NAME THEN SHUT UP AND GET TO YOUR DORM!!!"shouted doom. _________play ground________ "ok heres the playground"said nerd trying to be sly."why are we here?"questioned rex."the map"explained des."attension slifers im your headmaster proffesor goodwin"said goodwin."why are we here?"questioned rex."a race first one to the slifer red dorm gets the best room"said goodwin as everyone ran. ______forest____________ "almost their"shouted rex."huh"said a voice."WHatt--"shouted rex as he tripped."its us me an nerd"said des."well well well slifer slackers"shouted a voice."huh who is it"questioned rex."your worst nightmare"shouted an oblisk as he jumped out of the bushes."who are you"questioned rex."LETS DUEL"laughed the oblisk. Rex vs the oblisk____ "ill start things off"shouted rex. Rex summons sonic chick(def 300) then sets a card. "amuter"said the oblisk."ITS NOT"shouted nerd."maybe it is"replied des."what do you know bad hand but better than yours"laughed oblisk. The oblisk summons destiny hero-doom lord(atk 600)then sets a card."doom lord slice that chick into feathers"laughed oblisk. "ill show you"said rex. Rex summons speed warrior(atk 900)"guess what his attack is doubled on the battle phase of the turn he was summoned so his attack is now 1800"said rex.speed warrior attacks doom lord(oblisk 2800) "so what noob my revenge will cut speed warrior since the fack is that his attack is now 900"laughed the oblisk. The oblisk summons destiny hero-dimond dude(atk 1400).Then he orders dimond dude to attack speed warrior(Rex 3500)."hup want more I play clock tower prison with enternal dread making my clock have 2 counters"laughed the oblisk."oh yeah thers more my dimond dude makes me look at the top of my deck if its a normal spell card it goes to the graveyard then to my hand". "ok its time for victory"said rex as he drew."speaking of time my clock it now has 3 counters"laughed oblisk. Rex summons junk synchron(atk 1300)his effect gets speed warrior(atk 900).Finaly he tributes speed warrior(lv 2) and junk synchron(lv 3) to synchro summon junk warrior(lv 5 atk 2300).Junk warrior destroy dimond dude(oblisk 1900) "YAY"shouted des and nerd."its just lucky for you"shouted oblisk as he drew."STOP THE DUEL"shouted goodwin."fine"said the oblisk"I would of won it plus ill duel you later""lets go back"said rex. __________slifer red dorm/cafe______ "ok who won"said rex."ok des,nerd and rex you get in since you got destracted"said goodwin."yess"said nerd"just go to your room"said goodwin ________slifer red dorm/rex,nerd and des room__________ "this is nice oh theres a note"said des DEAR NOOBS, our duel may have gone interuppted but ill chalenge you later and you will die like you were suppose to do last time curse you goodwin ill beat him up first AGUUUHHH!!!!! yours faithfully Destruct "so his names destruct"said nerd."ohhhh hes going to get his reenge plus who would of win the duel?"questioned rex"I dunno maybe him since he was gutted that our headmaster intersuppted it"said des."I just remembered something the prison I heard it before but the only thing I know is it gains a counter on the opponants turn and a specil power is made when it has 4."remembered nerd"the prison had 3 so its power would of came by if the duel wasn't interrupted"said rex. END OF CHAPTER 2 [spoiler=chapter 3 anti day]_________________________slifer red dorm/rex room________________ "Wake up"shouted nerd."Huh"said rex as he woken up."Well lets see class"said des."Oh I forgotten"said rex."Ok we are going"said nerd as he and des left. ___________________________classroom_________________________ "Finaly here"said rex."REX YOU ARE LATE!!!"shouted doom."Bu bu bu bu-"said rex."You have to duel your headmaster using the anti rule"said doom."The what?"questioned rex."Ok the anti rule is when the people bet an card and the winner takes it"explained goodwin as he put the disk on"lets duel" Before the duel started destruct went up to doom and said"how about an duel I heard you had a new destiny hero ill bet my prison you bet the destiny hero""Deal"said doom. Rex vs Goodwin_____________ "Before we start the anti I bet nitro warrior and nitro synchron also because I bet a high amount you have to bet an high one to"explained Goodwin."Fine I bet junk warrior and junk synchron"said Rex. "Ok Ill start with a basic move"said goodwin.Goodwin summons bever warrior(atk 1200). "Why did you throw a brick at my head before?"questioned Morph to Samuel."Because it wasn't me you spoon"replied Samuel."huh my names Rowan"said Rowan Rex summons speed warrior(atk 900)"you know hes attack doubles"said Rex.Speed warrior attacks bever warrior (Goodwin 3400). "Ok now ill be going more hard on you"aid Goodwin.Goodwin activates premuter berial (Goodwin 2600).To specil summon bever warrior then, he tributes it to summon curse of the dragon(atk 2000).Secondly,he summons battle ox(atk 1700).Finaly, he orders battle ox to attack speed warrior (Rex 3200),And curse of the dragon attacks Rex (Rex 1200) "Lol"said Destruct in the backround."Do you think Rex would win?"questioned Des."Hes got to if he loses this hes going to lose more without his junk warrior"said Nerd.("ok got to do this")thought Rex. Rex summons quilbolt hedgehog(atk 800)."What your weak hedgehog can't beat me"laughed Goodwin."He maybe weak now but my unstopable evolution will make my hedgehog's attack 2400"explained Rex.Quildbolt hedgehog attacks battle ox (Goodwin 2200) Goodwin activates premuter berial (Goodwin 1400)to specil summon battle ox,then activates call of the haunted to specil summon bever warrior and tributes them to summon gaia the firce knight(atk 2300)."now polimsation activate"said Goodwin.The polimsation fuses gaia and curse of the dragon to fusion summon gaia the dragon champion(atk 2600).Gaia attacks quilbolt hedgehog (Rex 1000). ("No my hedgehog")Thought Rex.Rex summons junk synchron(lv 3)his effect specil summons speed warrior(atk 900).Since theres a tuner quilbolt hedgehog is specil summoned (lv 2).Rex tributes junk synchron and quilblot hedgehog to synchro summon junkwarrior(lv 5 atk 2300)"oh yeah junk warrior gains attack equal to speed warrior making his attack 3200 now junk warrior send gaia to the scrap heap"Shouted Rex. (Goodwin 800)And speedwarrior attacks Goodwin(Goodwin 0) "very impressive"said Goodwin."Oh I forgotten about lessons"said Doom"time for teaching" _________________________at the oblisk blue dorm________________ "huh that wimp Rex would of lost urghhhhh but Goodwin had to stop the duel ill challenge him and ill beat the noob to oblivion"Laughed Destruct."You would of won the duel"said a voice from behind."whos that?"questioned Destruct as he turned. THE END OF CHAPTER 3 [spoiler=chapter 4 morphitronic madness]_________________________slifer red dorm/Rex's room______________ "Ok I need to know about your decks im serious please"begged Rex."Fine I collect ojama's"explained Des."What those weak guys"questioned Rex."Together they are powerful"replied Des"wait wheres Nerd"_________________________classroom___________________________ "Hello im your ra yellow teacher about yugioh histologhy names steinstein but just call me stein"said Stein"HEY THATS THE NOOB"said a slifer."Hump ra yellows can beat slifers and to prove it ill get a slifer red and he will duel my smartly known duel theory Morph"explained Stein."Oh sorry im late"said Nerd as he entered."You will duel Morph"explained Stein."Go Morph pwn those noobs"said Samuel."Well Samuel its about the person not there clouthes"said Rowon."Well then I know Morph and his stratagies"explained Samuel."I belive Nerd can do it"said Rex. _____________Nerd vs Morph "winers first losers second"laughed Morph as he drew. Morph summons morphitronic celfon(atk 100) then activates his effect to row a dice.The number is 6 so Morph looks at the top 6 cards then chose an morphitronic monster out of them then can specil summon it.He choses morphitronic borden(def 1800) then sets a card. "Yep its morph's game"said Samuel."Huh celfon may not be destroyed by battle but borden can"replied Rowon."Nerd can do it if he has a perfect deck"said Des."I think there both lame"said Destruct as everyone finaly noticed him. Nerd summons steamroid(atk 1800) then steamroid attacks celfon but morph activates morphitronic bind negating the attack. Morph summons morphitronic magnet bar(atk 100)."Theres more magnet bar gains attack equal to borden and celfon making his attack 700 but for now my borden's effect makes all my morphitronics do a direct attack"explained Morph.Borden switches to atk then magnet bar attacks Nerd directly(Nerd 3300). "urghhh"said Nerd."Theres no chance of that wimp of winning"laughed Destruct."hmmm maybe not"said Nerd. Nerd summons Gyroid and gyroid attacks magnet bar(Morph 3700). "Big deal you did tiny damage to me"said Morph."Oh then ill contiue to damage your life points"said Nerd. Morph summons morphitronic borden(def 1800) and morphitronic celfon switches to def mode(def 100)then the borden in atk mode attacks Nerd(Nerd 2200) "Lets see you win now"boasted Morph."Ok"said Nerd."Do you see it"said Stein to Rex."Huh"Questioned Rex."you idiot the thing is the borden in def mode stops the other morphitronic monsters from being destroyed and the borden in atk mode can use any morphitronic monsters do a direct attack"explained Samuel. Nerd activates heavy storm destroying all spells and traps so morphitronic binds destroyed.Then Nerd summons patroid(atk 1200).Steamroid attacks borden in def mode then patroid attacks the other borden(Morph 3000)and gyroid attacks celfon. "hmmmm"said morph"so what?"questioned Nerd. Morph summons morphitronic slingan(atk 1200) then activates 2 junkbox bringing borden(atk 500) and magnet bar(atk becones 1800).Magnet bar attacks Nerd(Nerd 400).Then Nerd activates hintoma inflicting 500 points of damage to Nerd(Nerd 0) "HA!!!"laughed Morph as he walked to Samuel."HI 5"said two ra yellows."ok now for yugioh histology lesson"said Stein. ___________________________oblisk blue dorm____________________ "so"said Destruct."I will be your fortune teller"said ???"was that what you wanted yestrurday?"questioned Destruct."yes now I predict you will challenge an rival whose suppose to be lower than you but he thinks he can win?"questioned ???."yes"said Destruct."ahhh"said ???"now your future" END OF CHAPTER 4 [spoiler=chapter 5 exploding clock]_____________________________slifer red dorm/cafe_______________ "Now what?"questioned Rex."Im more better after losing but I would of lost anyway but better than Des would of done"Replied Nerd."HEY!!!"shouted Des."Calm down"said Rex."Guys theres a duel happening in class Destruct is taking on 4 other obliskes"said Rowen. _____________________________classroom________________________ "Ha I guess I win"laughed Destruct."Waaaaaa"cried one of the oblisk."I challenge you"declared Rex."WHAT!!"shouted Nerd and Rowen. ____________________________Rex vs Destruct ("Now my pawn when you win my task will be finished"),thought ???."Ok ill go first"said Destruct Destruct summons destiny hero-dimond dude then activates clock tower prison. "Ok"said Rex."Oh yeah my clock gains a counter"explained Destruct. Rex summons speed warrior(atk 900) also his atk doubles to 1800 then speed warrior attacks dimond dude(Destruct 3600). "So next time your going to be lucky to lower my life points"boasted Destruct."Well I believe Rex will win"said Des."Your joking"replied Rowen. Destruct summons destiny hero-dunker(atk 1200) then discards doom lord because of dunkers effect to inflict 500 points of damage to Rex(Rex 3500).Then dunker attacks speed warrior (Rex 3200). "My pawn is going to win"wisperd ???."More counters"said Destruct. Rex summons junk synchron(lv 3) and its effect specil summons speed warrior(lv 2) and they are both tributed to synchro summon junk warrior(lv 5 atk 2300).Junk warrior attacks dunker(Destruct 2500). "My master is here"said Destruct."Whats his name?"questioned Rex."Call me Samon"said Samon. Destruct activates enternal dread giving clock tower prison 2 counters then he activates dust tornado destroying clock tower prison to specil summon destiny hero-dreadmaster(atk 0)."witness my strongest monster here his effect first he specil summons 2 destiny heroes from my graveyard so come dunker and dimond dude but thats not all he also gains attack equal to them making his attack 2600"explained Destruct.Dreadmaster attacks junk warrior(Rex 2900) then dimond dude and dunker attacks Rex(Rex 300) "Arghh"said Rex"why does it hurt""Well the thing is you got hit by an powerful combine attacks"explained Samon."Yep soon his life points will reach 0"laughed Destruct."nope im not going to give up"said Rex. Rex sets 3 face downs then summons goblin elite attack force(atk 2200).Gobin attack force attacks dunker(Destruct 1500)"why isn't dunker destroyed?"questioned Rex."Well easy dreadmasters effct stops other destiny heroes from being destroyed"said Destruct.goblin attack force switches to def mode(def 1500) "ok lets see if you can win ha"laughed Destruct. Dreadmaster attacks goblin attack force but Rex activates scrap iron scarecrow negating the attack.Then Destruct sets a card and activates spellbinding circle stopping goblin elite attack force from switching its position. Rex summons healing wave generator(def 1600).Healing waves effect makes Rex gain 400 life points(Rex 700).Then Rex activates his face down emergancy pervision gaining 2000 life points from destroying 2 cards(Rex 2700). "What an loser once losing then wining but Samon says I will win"said Destruct. Dreadmaster attacks healing wave generator.Then Destruct equips Dreadmaster with ring of magnetism(atk 2100) Rex activates double summon summoning nitro synchron(lv2) and sonic chick(lv 1) tributes the 3 to synchro summon nitro warrior(lv 7 atk 2800).Nitro warrior attacks dreadmaster but Destruct activates d-shield switching dreadmaster to def mode as the attack landed."Nitro warriors effect switchs dreadmaster to atk mode and then they battle again the bad thing is dreadmaster suvives because of the shield"explained Rex.(Destruct 800) "Its almost over and face it ill win"said Destruct."Hes right"said Samuel who just entered with Morph."How?"questioned Nerd."If Destruct summons an destiny hero with 800 atk or more Rex is done for"explained Morph. Destruct summons destiny hero-captin tenasious(atk 800)making dreadmasters attack 2900."HA HA HA NOW DREADMASTER PWN THAT NITRO WARRIOR"laughed Destruct.(Rex 2500)Then dimond dude,captin tenasious and dunker attacks Rex(Rex 0). "AHHH OW MY ARM"shouted Rex as he fainted."Ha"laughed Destruct as he left."No Rexs lost"said Goodwin. _______________________________Samons hidout__________________ "ha the duel energy will release the by newest card in my possetion"said Samon."I am reborn"said ???."now Rexs defeat from the direct attack will soon make him see duel monster spirts"said Samon. The reborn creature came out the shadows and looked like an lava dragon. "arghhhh soon my brothers will be reborn also"shouted the lava dragon. END OF CHAPTER 5 [spoiler=chapter 6 four on four part 1]___________________________hospital__________________________________ ("Rex wake up")said a voice in Rexs head."Huh"said Rex."Finaly your awoken"said the nurse."Im happy too"screeched Nerd."Finaly I can leave"said Rowen as he left."Rex somethings odd happening"said Des."What happened?"questioned Rex."You were in a coma after you lost the duel also energy from your arm is drained a little making you see odd things but im warning you it is said if you lose again your entire bodies energy would be drained then you will enter the shadow world"replied the Nurse."More odd things as happened since your coma other students have been in the same ingeries and these shady people have came but we have send Morph,Samuel and Destruct on them"said the Docter. ________________________________Samon's hideout______________________ "Ha ha ha soon your brouthers will be realeased it may have took me months to bring you but thats why I came here because we are getting duel energy 3 times more quicker because they are everywhere the losers get drained the winners get ambused and drained"laughed Samon."Yep and I will be stronger soon you will get what you wanted"said the Lava dragon"wait one minute I see something you sent those demon theves to do more dirty work""yes those fools will increase it by 50% plus those guys are like a little tougher than the students the more they duel the more energy drained from the loser ha"laughed Samon. __________________________________oblist blue/Destruct's room________ "Im sick of searching doomlord since ill just lie here until I get ambused"said Destruct to Doomlord."Ahhh an shady guy"said dimond dude as he looked out the window."Huh call me the masked demon"said the masked demon."LETS DUEL"they both shouted as doom lord and captin tenacious high fived. ___________________________________ra yellow dorm/cafe_______________ "the cafe is the best"said Morph as he was sitting waiting for the lobster."Ha ha ha time to beat a noob"said an shady guy as he lep out of the window."Not trouble well my morphitronics ca-"said Morph."lose"interupted the shady guy"Call me the white Demon" ___________________________________ra yellow dorm/Samuels room_______ While Samuel was sorting his deck out an shady guy comes in as he got his duel disk. "Call me the mustery demon"said the mystery demon."Ok LETS DUEL"shouted Samuel _________________________Destruct vs masked demon in Destructs room Destruct has 3000 life points and destiny hero-fear monger(atk 1000)Masked demon has 100 life points. "Im not giving up first I summon masked kinght lv 3(atk 1500) and activate his effect inflicting 400 points of damage(Destruct 2600) but theres a downside I can't attack unless I activate lv up"said the masked demon.Lv up tributes masked knight lv 3 to lv 5(atk 2300).And masked knight attacks fear monger(Destruct 1300). "Huh not bad but Im still going to win"said Destruct. Destruct summons destiny hero-dimond dude(atk 1400).Then activates dark city and dimond dude attacks masked knight."Are you crazy?"questioned the masked demon."You need to learn dark city makes an destiny hero that attacks and higher attack monster gains 1000 atk"explained Destruct.(masked demon 0) "Urghhh painfull horror"said the masked demon as he fell down the window."Owch oh well ive got to get back to the hospital my mission is complet"said Destruct to himself. _______________________Morph vs the white demon in cafe_____________ Morph has 500 life points,3 morphitronic(in hand) and morphitronic-datatron(atk 1200). White demon has 700 life points and blue eyes white dragon(atk 3000). "time for stills since its my turn and ill win"said Morph."Got guts for a wimp"replied the white demon. Morph tributes morphitronic datatron to summon gaget hauler(atk 1300) then discards 3 morphitronic to make its atk 3700.Then hauler attacks blue eyes(white 0). "Ahhhh not the coma"shouted the white demons as he fell in a coma. __________________________Samuel vs mystery demon in Samuels room____ Samuel has 4000 life points and mika the cost free sevent(atk 500).The mystery demon has 500 life points. ("this is the most odd duel ever")thought Samuel."I know you should know im a spy for the demon and the more I try the more Samons tasks are complet so wipe me out I was forced to duel you"said the mystery demon."fine then mika direct attack"said Samuel.(mystery demon 0)"Oh well I may be in a coma for years but its not that bad what I feel hard"said the mystery demon.("you are a traitor so you will suffer an big trip to the shadow world")said the voice in the mystery demons head as he disappeared. _____________________________Hospital________________________________ "Ha ha ha ill duel Rex into an doom"laughed the shady guy as he carried Rex away and left."Ok Rex time for an ingection"as the docter entered and discovered Rex wasn't there."DOH"shouted the docter. TO BE CONTINUED [spoiler=chapter 7 four on four part 2]____________________________Hospital__________________________ "I have gathered you for an missing student"said the docter."Let me guess Rex"replied Destruct."How did you know?"questioned the docter."We all knew because one hes not in the hospital bed when hes suppose to be in for today"explained Morph."Ive found something"said Samuel who just entered with Rowen."Theres an cave with a red door and an grave follow me"said Rowen as the team left. ______________________________mystery cave___________________ "Where where am I?"questioned Rex."Your awake now we duel then ask questions"said the shady guy as he pulled out his disk."Not yet who are you?"questioned Rex."Fine ill tell you im the ringleader the master the demon"said the head demon. As Rex prepared his duel disk he noticed behind that guy was an yellow door as he was wondering. ______________________Rex vs the demon "Time for me to go first"said Rex. Rex summons quilbolt hedgehog(def 800) then sets a card. "You think just because you put a monster in defence mode you won't take damage infact because of your defence mode thing you will take more damage ha"laughed the demon."Huh?"questioned Rex."Nvm"replied the demon. The demon summons pursuit chaser(atk 1400) then equips it with fairy medor crush."pursuit chaser demolish that hedgehog and because of the equip card you will lose 600 and also pursuit chasers effect you lose 500"laughed the demon.(Rex 2900) "Urghhh"said Rex. ________________________outside the cave_______________________ "Hmm intresting that note"said Destruct who was looking at an message."What does it say"said Morph whos looking at the red door."When the lava dragon is unleased the red door is open.When the thunder dragon is umleased the yellow door is open.When the dark fiend is unleased the blue door will open.Inside the blue door is the-"saod Destruct."What else"said Samuel."Nothing else someone removed the rest"replied Destruct."What is it acid rain"said Rowen sarcasim."Lets just go in"said Morph. ______________________Back to Rex vs the demon "ok im still ready"said Rex."fist I activate my face down minitrise decreasing your pursuit chasers atk by 1000".Then Rex summons speed warrior(atk 900 and doubled to 1800).So speed warrior attacks pursuit(The Demon 2600) "Huh just lucky for now my move"laughed The Demon."Wait a minute your that person who once stole one of my cards"said Rex."Correct that goyo guardian was handy so im not giving it up"said the Demon. He summons gonogo(atk 1350) who attacks speed warrior(Rex 2450). "Ok prepare for more"said Rex. Rex activates monster recarnation discarding a card to bring speed warrior to his hand.Then activates double summon summoning speed warrior(atk 1800) and magna draco(atk 1400).Magna draco attacks gonogo(The Demon 2550).But magna draco switches to def mode(def 600) and speed warrior attacks the demon(the demon 750). "Whos laughing now"laughed Rex."Ill have the last laugh"shouted the demon as he drew a card."Yep just as predicted"said The Demon. The Demon activates monster recarnation to bring gonogo.Activates double summon summoning jutte fighter(lv 2) and gonogo(lv 3) but he can specil sumon turbo booster(lv 1).The three his tributed to synchro summon goyo gaurdian(lv 6 atk 2800).He then activates pot of greed to draw 2 cards then activates spell reproducing bringing a spell back by discarding 2 spells so he choses fairy medor witch equips to goyo gaurdian.Goyo guardian attacks magna draco(Rex 250).Then sets a card. "ha ha ha"laughed The Demon."We are here"said Destruct as they entered."Ill join in"said Rowen."Ok so my life points go up"said the demon."Nope"said Rowen. "Ok now card destruction now I remove 2 battrymans that were send to the graveyard to specil summon battryman-industrial strenth(atk 2700) then I activate stop defence switching magna draco to atk"explained Rowen.Industrial strenth attacks magna draco but the demon activates rush recfally making magna gain 700 atk even thought its destroyed.(The Demon 150) The Demon activates dian keto the cure master(The Demon 1150)Then summons search stricker(atk 1600) then equips it with synchro boost making its atk 2100.Goyo gaurdian attacks industrial strenth(Rowen 3900) then search striker attacks Rowen(Rowen 1800). Rex activates double summon summoning turbo synchron(lv 1) and shield warrior(lv 3).And tributes the three to synchro summon turbo warrior(lv 6 atk 2500)."turbo warrior atk goyo guardian since his attack is halved"said Rex.(The Demon 50) The demon had a shock so big he did nothing. Rowen activates polimisation fusing 2 thunder dragons to make twin headed thunder dragon(atk 2800) and discards electrick viris to gain control of search stricker."Somethings odd"said Rex."Now search stricker destroy the demon"commanded Rowen.(The demon 0)"Arghhh"said the demon as Rowen was looking at the yellow door."whats the twin headed thunder dragon for?"questioned Rex."You now twin headed attack turbo warrior"commanded Rowen.(Rex 0) Rex goes into a coma with that demon as all the people in a coma dissapear. "Whats going on"Destruct shouted at Rowen."Explain later but look around you"replied Rowen. Around the place was eletrick and then the yellow door opened.Everyone except Destruct left. "Hmm an Destiny hero card"said Destruct as he picked an card left from the demon. THE END OF CHAPTER 7 [spoiler=chapter 8 pychic duel]____________________________the golden room___________________ "Whats this hmm"said Morph."An golden room and look an blue door who knows whats behind it"explained Rowen"Now listen why I did the thing before for use to get here I had to do it to release that dragon and past the blue door is the answer to the mystery""Sorry I was behind I found a card"said Destuct as he entered."Hmmm the people are here time to see you do my little game"said Samon."Haaa I seee afterr theee duell endss the dooor willl open"said the lava dragon."Why are you miss saying it wrong?"said Samuel."You will never know ha ha ha"laughed the thunder dragon. ______________________at the classroom_________________________ "I miss them"said Nerd."All we can do is duel"said Des."Shut up"shouted Doom."Why"said Nerd."Lol"laughed Stein. _______________________golden room___________________________ "Lets duel Destruct"said Samon."What huh since before you used me for your world domination"said Destruct."Ok an agreement if you win ill bring all the people who have have been in the shadow world back and put this spirts of the sacred beasts"said Samon."What there the sacred beasts Uria,Hamon and that other one"said Rowen."Fine"said Destruct as he pulled his disk out."If you lose then the third sacred beast will be released and the door will open thereby giving me the deck but you will all be in the shadow world ok lets duel"explained Samon. _____________________________Destruct vs Samon________________ "Wait what"said Destruct."Trying to surrender but before you do it then the duel will be over and I will win making you and your friends joining Rex"laughed Samon. Samon summons kerbons(atk 1200) then sets a card. "Ok then Ill have to do it"said Destruct. Destruct summon destiny hero-dimond dude(atk 1400) dimond dude attacks kerbons but its effect negates the attack(Samon 3200).And Destruct sets a card. An dark shadow surrounds Samon as he seems hurt."Whats that?"questioned Destruct."Don't you know an shadow duel when you see one"explained Samon"Huh then I better not lose"said Destruct"Ok soon I will rule the world"said Samon."Nope ill win"said Destruct. Samon summons telekinetic shocker(atk 1700) it attacks dimond dude(Destruct 3700).But Destruct activates destiny signal specil summoning destiny hero-dunker(def 1700). "Fine I couldn't inflict as much damage this turn but next you will be almost done"said Samon."Urghhh that duel hurts more than dueling Rex wait then seemed like a shadow game"said Destruct"And the duel before now""Exactly the shadow duels came after you dueled Rex and my powers grow stroger near the inside"explained Samon. Destruct discards doom lord to inflict 500 points of damage to Samon(Samon 2700)then he tributes dunker to summon dasher(atk 2100).Dasher attacks kerbons as it activates its effect(Samon 1900). "And since the attack was negated then dasher is still in atk mode"said Destruct."Lucky"said Samon. Samon activates his face down psi-station then summons lifeforce harmonizer(lv 2) then tributes it,kerbons(lv 2) and telekinetic shocker(lv 4) to synchro summon thought ruler archfiend(lv 8 atk 2700).Psi-station's effect makes Samon pay 500 life points to make thought ruler archfiend gain 300 atk and increase its lv(Samon 1400)(thought ruler archfiend atk 3000) "Now thought ruler archfiend destroy dasher"said Samon. Suddenly as the attack was about to hit an dark figure hit Morph,Samuel,Rowen and Destruct.Also the blue door opens and Samon just enters. ___________________________the dark world_____________________ "Oh hello"said Rex."Hello where are we"said Morph."The shadow world its an dark place of nothing like space but it has no stars or planets.It also has portals"explained Rex."NOO WE ARE STUCK ON THIS RUBISH NO LIFE FORM"shouted Rowen. [spoiler=chapter 9 escape from the shadows part 1]____________________________classroom_________________________ "Where are they?"questioned Nerd."My guess in an bin"replied Des."Shut up you wimps to real matter the chancellor is coming back with his past srudent I hope it was kevin the dragon master"said Doom."Oh please I hope its that science master whos my best student"said Stein."Hello chancellor Harold here"said Harold with Kevin."Hello Kevin"said Doom as they shaked."Wheres the duel"said Kevin."Kevins dueling you two in 2 private duels"said Harold."Ok we accept"said Stein _________________________________Stein vs Kevin________________ "Ill go first"said Kevin. Kevin summons lord of d(atk 1200) then sets a card. "Not bad"said Doom."Shut up I can beat it"said Stein. Stein summons hydrogeddon(atk 1600).Hydrogeddon attacks lord of d(Kevin 3600)and hydrogeddon's effect specil summons another one what attacks Kevin(Kevin 2000).Then sets a card. "You were a great student too bad I was an tough teacher"shouted Stein."Hmm Kevin was better and Stein is angry"wispered Doom."True"Harold wisperd back."Ive found out why Stein was hard on us"said Nerd. Kevin activates his face down primature berial paying 800 life points(Kevin 1200) to specil summon lord of d from his graveyard.Then he activates flute of summoning dragon specil summoning rare metal dragon(atk 2400) and gravie crush dragon(atk 2400).Gravie attacks hydrogeddon but Stein activates scrap iron scarecrow negating the attack but rare metal dragons attack destroys hydrogeddon(Stein 3200). "Hmmp luck"said Stein. Stein summons oxygeddon(atk 1800).Oxygeddon attack lord of d(Kevin 600).Then sets a card. Rare metal dragon attacks hydrogeddon but Stein activates wildspred ruin negating the attack and destroying gravie crush. "Ha ha ha if you learned more lessons you won't be in this mess"laughed Stein."Ill win"relied Kevin. Stein activates premature berial(Stein 2400) to specil summon hydrogeddon(atk 1600)"Now witness my ultimate monster water drgon because I activate bonding h20 tributing my amazing 3 to form an powerful creature of course behold water dragon(atk 2800)"said Stein.Water dragon attacks rare metal dragon(Kevin 200) Kevin specil summons vice dragon(atk 1000) then tributes it to summon strong wind dragon(atk becomes 3400).Then heavy storm destroys every spell and trap and strong wind is equiped with 3 dragons treasure(atk 4300).Strong wind attacks water dragon (Stein 900). "No my best card"shouted Stein."Well thats all"said Kevin."I surrender"said Stein."Now its you Doom"said Harold. ______________________________The dark world__________________ "Almost their"said Rex."Stop"shouted an dark figure"Not again"said Samuel."Yes terrible"said Destruct."Don't worry Ive got new cards"said Rex."Ok then"said Rowen."Your decks no use to me"said ???. To be continued [spoiler=chapter 10 escaping the shadows part 2]_________________________Rex vs ???___________________________ "Before we duel my names Ryan"said Ryan."Ok its about the duel you go first"said Rex."Somethings odd"said Destruct. Ryan activates underworld cavern then summons zombie master(atk 1800)."Now my caverns effect inflicts 800 points of damage to you"said Ryan(Rex 3200) "No in 4 more turns if Ryan summons a zombie monster each time its done for Rex and we will be-"said Morph."Here forever"interupted Samuel."Emm the duels more trouble look at Rex"said Rowen."Ahh my legs stun"shouted Rex."Let me guess shadow duel its hard"said Destruct. Rex summons speed warrior(atk 900 doubled to 1800).Speed warrior attacks zombie master resulting in both monsters destroyed then Rex sets a card. "Ha"laughed Ryan."What"said Rex."Samon told me you had a brain but from now it seems hes right"explained Ryan. Ryan summons canon soldier(atk 1300)."Canon soldier strike Rexs life points"commanded Ryan."No I discard kuribo to take no damage from the negated attack"said Rex."Fine you stopped that but I tribute cannon soldier to inflict 500 points of damage"Explained Ryan(Rex 2700) Rex summons ghost guardna(def 1900). "What an weak ghost ha ha funny"laughed Ryan."Huh"said an mystery person."Oh no my guess Ryans going to summon an powerful zombie"said Morph. Ryan activates call of the mummy specil summoning red eyes zombie dragon(atk 2400).Because an zombie monster was normal summoned underworld cavern inflicts 800 points of damage to Rex(Rex 1900).Then Red eyes attacks ghost guardna.(red eyes zombie atk 1400)"What"said Ryan."Its ghost guardnas effect"said Rex as he stumbled to his knees. Rex summons tune warrior(atk 1600) and tune warrior attacks red eyes zombie(Ryan 3800) "Yes"said Rex."Your lucky"said Ryan."What"said Rex."Just shut up"said Destruct. Ryan sets a card then sets an monster. "Ok"said Rex."Wondering"said Ryan Rex summons quilbolt hedgehog(atk 800).He then sets 2 cards and tune warrior attacks the monster but ryan activates sakaretsu armor destroying tune warrior but quilbolt hedgehog attacks it but the monster is poison mummy(def 1500)(Rex 700). "Its almost over"said Ryan."Nope because I activate emergancy pervision destroying my spell card to gain 2000 life points"said Rex.(Rex 2700) Ryan tributes poison mummy to summon ryu kokki(atk 2400)(Rex 1900).Ryu kokki attacks quilbolt hedgehog(Rex 200) "You know ill win I know your monsters are filled with warriors"said Ryan."How?"questioned Rex."Im not telling"replied Ryan. Rex summons winged kuribo(def 200) then sets a card. "Huh ryu kokki destroy that fur with wings"commanded Ryan."Oh no"said Samuel,Rowen,Destruct and Morph."I activate transedent wings tributing winged kuribo to lv 10 and I tribute it to destroy ryu kokki and inflict 2400 points of damage to you"laughed Rex."NOOOOO!!"shouted Ryan as his monster demolished.(Ryan 1400) Rex summons magna draco(atk 1400) and magna draco attacks Ryan(Ryan 0) "Fine ill tell you im a student trapped here and theres a portal behind me"explained Ryan as they left. ______________________classroom______________________________ "Nooo!"shouted Doom as his ancient gear golem was destroyed."I guess I win"said Kevin."Lol"said Stein."Hello we are back"said Rex."Finaly"said Nerd and Des."Welcome back and you bought back missing student Ryan"said Harold End of book Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 what the plot of of your fan-fic basically? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 good point ill add it laterok done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 hmm people please make a character by pm it to me and you will hopefuly get 1-3 reps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 'hopefully' that doesn't sound reassuring. i pm you the app. Would you like to join mine? Also the plot seem sketchy and undergraded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 chapter 1 is up sorry im late about saying that ill change the title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Do you want me to help you with your storyline grammer? Good, but was so random. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 name:Rowenage:15personality:cool,thoughtful,friendly,leaderfulappearance:raper hat,black hair blue jacket,blue jeans and a black t-shirtdorm:slifer reddeck:Thunder monsterssignature card:Lightning torturerbio:Rowen is one of the best duelists in the world and he is the European national champion.Enters the academy to beat every high level student so they move slifer red to the top.story part:He beats Rex and gives him a master lesson about playing.Dies after two years giving his soul to reseal the unleashed oricalcus that took control over Samuel Fox. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 ok the character will be made for anyone else making and character pm it to me and itchy you will get your reps amd your character.chapter 2 is up comment on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 that made more sense than chapter 1. I can help you with the grammar if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Fine im not saying the mad fine but ok ill make chapter 3 in sunday-tuesday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Why isn't my character in the list? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 This work is clearly inspired by Half Life: Full Life Consequences. The narration is near-identical, and the plot seems to be of similar quality. It could be SO much better. (However, DA fanfics can only get that good.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 okay I get to work on the one you already did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 oh sorry itachy ill put your character on the character list as soon as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 chapter 3 is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 Nice but I think you mean Ante Up for the title and duel. Rex can't always win you know. Feature other people winning and losing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 I know hes going to lose soon also you know chapter 2 duel well if it continued Rex would of lost.So ill explain later or maybe now nah ill explain later but your right I was thinking of putting morph and nerd in a duel well a sort one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 chapter 4 is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 That was a nice. :p Nerd didn't stand a chance against Morph in his presence state. I forgot to put in my app that my character decline advancing to the blue and will probably stay in Ra unless something happen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Now most of the secrets are discovered and ill have a small break on making chapters because I made a chat.And ill be making cards in it also maybe who know what. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 lol what you call 'break' is what other call 'writer block' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 lol also my chat is done but im still working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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