Excallibur Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Okay I know it may not be the best but here is my Membership card and the first card in my starting booster, I hope you like it1 " 1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters" When this card is sychro summoned successfully you can pay 1000 life points to have your opponent discard 2 cards from their hand. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent's life points they must skip their next draw phase. If this card attacks your opponent's life points directly declare a card type, your opponent picks up the top card of their deck, if it is the declared type your opponent discards the card. If It is wrong your opponent adds the card to their hand. I hope my OCG isn't too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Chrono Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I think this is the proper OCG fix. "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters"If this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can pay 1000 life points to have your opponent discard 2 cards from their hand. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, they must skip their next Draw Phase. When this card attacks your opponent directly, you can declare a Card Type, your opponent picks up the top card of their Deck, if it is the declared Type your opponent must discard the card. If it is not, your opponent adds the card to their Hand. ---Ridiculously Overpowered, but better then some beginners. Keep trying. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 hmm... abit op'd... OCG seems fine but i could be correted... still abit ify but... I dont mind it, pics leting it down... has potential to be great, untill then... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I just wanted to make my first card OP'd, but not undefeatable...maybe I should nuke its powers a bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 I totaly agree with above, and it's also a Synchro!The pic is somewhat blurry, but you're new so I'll just ignore that.A 6/10, becouse it's your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Oped very much so. The pic isn't to bad but its very blurry. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Not bad I like it pic looks good but is a bit fuzzy Oh and when you say type do you mean type as in Warrior and spellcaster or type as in Spell, Trap and Monster. If it's Spell, Trap n Monster then 8/10If not 6/10 I Like the Idea destroy there hand and restrict there draw totally gets rid of there supply of cards completely leaving them with nothing I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 it's a blurry pic and the effect is way too OPed, but since you're new I'll let some of it go and give you 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 uhm is this meant to be a reincarnated form of yata garasu or something?because yata garasu is a WIND fiend-type monster not a DARK winged-beast monsteralso i'm not sure about it's last effectdoes it mean by the type like spell, trap or monster card or type as in beast, spellcaster, warrior, etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xx White Diablo xX Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Bad OCG and blurry pic. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Blurry pic, bad OCG, blah blah blah. Everything's been said. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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