Xx White Diablo xX Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Okay, so I need help with my newest card. I'm not quite sure if all the OCG is correct, so that would help out alot. Any constructive criticism would be great. Thanks. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 face-down card on the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field with 3000 ATK and place 3 Detonator Counters on it (max 3). During each of your opponent's End Phases, remove 1 Detonator Counter from this card. If the number of Detonator Counters on this card reaches 0, destroy this card and your opponent loses 3000 Life Points. If this card is destroyed by it's own effect, return it to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 change "your opponent loses 3000 LP" to "inflict 3000 points of damage to your opponent" 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 and "as a result of battle" should read "by battle" 8/10 cool pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xx White Diablo xX Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Thanks. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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