Wanderley Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 [align=center] Deity TransporterThis card cannot be Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 "Deity" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent increase the ATK of 1 "Deity" monster (except "Deity Transporter") you control by 300. This card cannot be equipped with an Equip Spell Card. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Only errors I found are 'set' is capitalized, you misspelled 'except' and there's a period instead of a comma after 'Set'. Other than that it's perfect. Would be even more awesome as a Gold Rare. 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 OCG fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 "Deity" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, increase the ATK of 1 "Deity" monster (exept "Deity Transporter") you control by 300. This card cannot be equipped with an Equip Spell Card. I don't know... not a very creative effect here. :?It is just a "ATK gain" effect, and a very bad one. .-. Rate - 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 thanks Zeaux and Gandoraso Zeuax your correction is correct but except the little flaws my effect is right tooyour sounds more like the old one ;)^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Not the best pic but it is a nice card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 thank you^^i love that image^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Aren't "battle damage" supposed to be capitalized?Otherwise, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Sorry but your is not right wanderley. Never mind, use the OCG you think is better. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Hmm, the Gold Rare is a bit bright. It needs to be a bit darker. Oh well, you fixed the OCG so 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 kk^^ I'll make it a little more dark later^^thanks all :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 ocg fix:This card cannot be NORMAL Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special SummonED by REMOVING FROM PLAY 5 "Deity" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent increase the ATK of 1 "Deity" monster (except "Deity Transporter") you control by 300. DESTROY ANY EQUIP CARD THAT TARGETS THIS MONSTER. effect is a little boring and pic is meh. Also this could be used with posionous snake deity which i dont know if htat is intended but the last thing that card needs is more ATKoverall=6.8/10 not ur bestalso ATK and DEF should be 2400 2800 in my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 a little too plain of an effect, plus why'd you post it twice? 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 because one is a gold rare^^ ocg fix:This card cannot be NORMAL Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special SummonED by REMOVING FROM PLAY 5 "Deity" monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent increase the ATK of 1 "Deity" monster (except "Deity Transporter") you control by 300. DESTROY ANY EQUIP CARD THAT TARGETS THIS MONSTER. effect is a little boring and pic is meh. Also this could be used with posionous snake deity which i dont know if htat is intended but the last thing that card needs is more ATKoverall=6.8/10 not ur bestalso ATK and DEF should be 2400 2800 in my opinion thanksyour last sentence is wrong the equip card isn't destroyedthis card cannot equip with one^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 nyc pik... but i dont think th card is good enough to make gold edition... all roun good... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 mehh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 you wana know what gold edition cards are like... check my first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 dude I'm long enogh on this side to know thatBTW the card in your first post isn't great either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 BTW its cardssss, which is plural as there are 4! lier! haha you havent even cheked have you?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 dudeat first i looked for your threadsBTW in your thread are 5 cardslearn to count Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 u are correct, thea are 5, not 4, you pass. this is how I trulry know that you have seen my post... The the comment of "there are 4" was a merly to manipulate you into doing what I had hoped... some verification of your observation... hmph... very good... *rubs hands in sinister way* very satisfied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 bump......... .. .. .. ...... downgrade. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 dude that is spam -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 no, its a good card but.. not great... let it disaprear with the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 you have alread post with a rate in this thread so it is spamgo away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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