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Ryuk Dragon


MoxTheFox51590

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Me likey very much. Nice to see a vanilla. Love WATER monsters and Dragons too. Pretty good, but there're some things you could fix.

 

Don't use "1st Edition" as the Card Maker block capitalizes it and messes it up. Use Limited Edition or leave it blank. ;D

 

Use "EN" instead of "JM" in the Set ID suffix, as "EN" should always be at the front of the suffix on real cards and you've only got 5 characters to use.

 

In the name, "of" and "the" should start with lowercase letters.

 

In the flavor text, "Known to been" should be "Known to have been" or "Known to be". "It's" should be "Its", as "It's" is only used for "It is", not possessives.

 

Patch it up and it'll be very realistic. =)

 

it could of been like 1900 or 1850.

 

2000's fine. Gene-Warped Warwolf's 2000 and it's hardly anywhere near overpowered' date=' nobody even uses it anymore.

 

Don't make Vanilla's without support. Too much ATK right now. 6/10

 

Vanillas're just as Realistic as Effect Monsters, its ATK's fine as explained above. ;D

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