hollowblade Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 What I have now can be considered just a sample. There will definitely be more coming. BTW, I would like help with "The Lord's Realm" I want it to be epic, but I have total creativity block right now. So any suggestions or advice is appreciated. Oh, and please tell me exactly whats wrong with my OCG, there are some things I can't quite word right and need help with. [spoiler=Lore:]When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Soul Counter on this card (Max 3). If this card as 1 Soul Counter on it, increase this cards ATK by 500. If this card has 2 Soul Counters on it, once per turn you can send 1 card your opponent controls out of play (This card cannot attck the turn this effect is activated). Tribute 3 Soul Counters from this card to select 1 "The Lord's Realm" from your deck and place it into your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 once Rafael has another effect on it, it'll be good to go 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 ok pictures and ok effects 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The7thSorrow Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 cool cards first monster (soulcollecter archangel) is confusing, the way you have it worded it only gets 500 ATK when there is exactly 1 counter on it, when there are 2 on it, the card has a different effect. Im not sure this is what you were going for, make it say "1 or more counters"also "Tribute 3 Soul Counters from this card to...." = "You can remove 3 Soul Counters from this card to..." because healer archangel is revival support, switch its ATK and DEF other than that good job, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Nice healing effect, you should have made it lv4 with higher atk though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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