Dragon Evolutions Refixed

[wirespy]

I fixed my cards, hope you like them this time. Please comment and rate.

 

 

Solaris Dragon: You can Special Summon this card from your graveyard to your field when there is no monster(s) on your side of the field and there is 1 or more monster(s) on your opponent's side of the field. This card is not affected by Trap Cards. You can pay 800 life points to add 1 Trap Card to your hand from your graveyard.

 

Aqualis Dragon: You can Special Summon this card from your hand to your field when there is no monster(s) on your side of the field and 1 or more monster(s) on your opponent's side of the field, plus you must pay 800 life points. This effect can only be activated once. This card is not affected by Monster Cards' effect(s). Once per turn you can pay 900 life points to add 1 Spell Card from your graveyard to your hand. This card cannot be used as a tribute.

 

Dragon Evolution X: Send 1 face-up Dragon-Type monster on your field to the graveyard along with 1 other card in your hand and pay 1000 life points, Special Summon 1 "X Dragon" monster from your hand whose name contains the name of the tributed monster. This card cannot be added to your hand from the graveyard by the effect of a Dragon-Type monster.

 

Solaris X Dragon: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by the effect of the Spell Card "Dragon Evolution X." This card is not affected by Trap Cards. Once per turn, when this card destroys a monster in battle, add 1 Trap Card to your hand from the graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Infernal Dragon" from your graveyard.

 

Aqualis X Dragon: This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by the effect of the Spell Card "Dragon Evolution X." This card is not affected by Monster Cards' effect(s). Once per turn you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to the graveyard to add 1 Spell Card from your graveyard to your hand. If this card is sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Aqualis Dragon" from your graveyard.

 

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[Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi]

Infernal Dragon already exists. In the Zane pack.

[KurashiDragon]

Call it Solaris Dragon and I have no problems with it.

[KillerCubivore]

First off, the card name "Infernal Dragon" already exists.

 

Second, both are ridiculously Overpowered. Just being able to Special Summon them from the Graveyard like that with no cost as many times as you want per turn is broken. You could continuously Mass Driver either one for game in one turn. Make it once per turn or only during your Standby Phase. Also, There needs to be a drawback for summoning them so easily. Possibly card text saying "this card cannot be tributed or be used as Synchro Material."

 

Also, there Spell and Trap card retrieval is way too good. You should pretty much just take that out altogether on both of them. The second "X" versions of each can keep it I guess, you'd have to make it harder to summon them though. You might want to give Dragon Evolution X a big cost so it's not so easy to do.

 

Also, you keep putting "add 1 *something* to your hand from your Graveyard" when you should have "add 1 *something* from your Graveyard to your hand."

 

Good pics though ^_^ I like the idea of the cards to, just rework them a bit. I'll rate if you change them.

[ragnarok1945]

Change Infernal Dragon's name, that's already taken

[wirespy]

Thanks for your comments, I'll revise them.

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I revised them hope you like them.

[KurashiDragon]

Would you mind Copying the effect of the cards and pasting them on your post so people can edit them. You have ocg problems up the wazoo. and your cards are oped.

 

4/10

[Archelaus]

Pics are good. Minor OCG errors.

 

6/10