† Dagger † Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 [align=center]First card, enjoy!Image credit goes to Wanderley[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Okay first off, this card should be bumped up to level 8, second the last effect doesn't make sense with the first effect, don't you still lose 200 for having less cards now in your hand, change it to once per turn, you can pay 500 life points to increase the ATK of this card by 500. Also you should think of reducing the ATK of this card to 1900 or 1800 considering its effect that allows it to gain ATK just for having cards in your hand. Finally change the name to something that kinda goes well with the effect, because incredible hunter sounds like its effect has something to do with Beast-Type monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Dagger † Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 That is kinda the point. Scenario: You have 5 cards in your hand, Incredible Hunter's ATK is 2500. Use effect #2, Incredible Hunter's ATK drops to 2300 and is then raised to 2800. After the End Phase it is dropped back to 2300. Then you could do the same to raise it's ATK to 2400 etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Okay I kinda see where you're getting at, but fix the other things so it would make sense even more. 9/10 for beginner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Dagger † Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Fixed sorta, I like the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Cool, good luck in your future posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
† Dagger † Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Thanks! PS congrats with the 2 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Oh thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 for the 1st effect you should say you can only have a max of 5 cards in your hand. Otherwise it'd be saying like as long as it's face up on the field the number of cards in your hand will ALWAYS remain 5 and can never be changed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 for the 1st effect you should say you can only have a max of 5 cards in your hand. Otherwise it'd be saying like as long as it's face up on the field the number of cards in your hand will ALWAYS remain 5 and can never be changed 7/10 This ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 for the 1st effect you should say you can only have a max of 5 cards in your hand. Otherwise it'd be saying like as long as it's face up on the field the number of cards in your hand will ALWAYS remain 5 and can never be changed 7/10 This but then, a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 underpowered in my opinionmake it's first effect affect both players and increase ATK/DEF slightly, 300 at the mostotherwise this is pretty awesome, especially for a first timer8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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